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Option Two: the Edwardian Proposal

Chapter 5

Reader - please read this first: This is an adults-only story combining science fiction with sadistic sexual fantasy. It is to be read only by consenting adults over age 18. If you not over 18 or if you are offended by the literary depiction of sexual torture , mutilation, or gratuitous murder, please read no further and leave now . While no one was hurt or exploited in the writing of this imaginary tale, the author wishes to make it clear that she does not condone the mistreatment of real people. This story is entirely a product of the author's imagination, and no visual images were used in its production. This story is protected by copyright law, and using or copying it, in whole or in part, is prohibited. All names used in this story are fictitious and any similarity to the name of a real person is a coincidence.

Option Two: the Edwardian Proposal - Chapter Five by Jill Crokett

(copyright 2004, Jillian Victoria Crokett)

The Slaughter

Mary's shaved body felt cool as she was escorted through double doors into the banquet hall. She was not handcuffed or restrained in any way. As she entered the hall she could see a stage where Edwardians in white coats appeared to be making some sort of technical preparations. The hall was full of festive Edwardian men and women sitting at large round tables drinking what looked like exotic, glow-in-the-dark cocktails. As Mary was escorted down the center isle the guards stopped her every few meters as merrymakers reached out and ran their fingers over the 38-year-old mom's smooth pussy. Some groped her full round butt and hanging double-D tits. All eyes followed her as she was led to the stage.

Once on the giant stage, Mary could see several open pit charcoal fires glowing off to one side. While her eyes darted around at the stage activities, guards positioned her over one of several floor drains and turned her to face the audience of seated diners.

Looking up at the brightly lit stage, the attendees saw an attractive, large busted, somewhat full figured, middle-aged, human female. She was stripped naked and her head and pussy were shaved bare, the vertical slit of her femininity clearly visible between her legs. She had large, pendulous breasts and wide, saddlebag hips. They gazed up at her the way diners on earth look at a live lobster that they have just selected from the tank to eat.

As Mary faced the audience with her back to those making preparations behind her, Lawrence stepped up on the stage and began to speak.

"Ladies and gentlemen, just three hours ago, Mary here was abducted from her home on Earth. Since arriving here on Edo she's been shaved from head to toe, given a thorough enema, and has been anally raped by several well-hung Africans. We will now continue her preparation here on stage."

"Mary, put your arms straight up over your head, and spread your feet apart" Lawrence ordered.

As Mary obeyed his command, two Edwardians in lab coats approached her, each carrying a bucket of warm soapy water and a washcloth. As she stood in submission the technicians washed her hairless body from head to toe as the crowd of about 200 looked on. While one technician washed her pussy lips, another wiped the crack of her ass with a wet cloth. Her only thought was that her cooperation might assure the safety of her family.

As her nude body was hand-washed in front of hundreds of spectators, Mary wasn't aware that technicians were placing on the floor behind her a thin, lightweight, custom-made metal cross to which she would be strapped. The cross was shaped like a modified X, with one straight piece that would run a short distance, from the base of her neck, down to her waist. At each end of the straight section, opposing V shaped pieces transitioned out to accommodate her spread arms and legs, forming the overall X shape. The angles of the arm and leg sections were slightly different, with the arm pieces angling somewhat overhead, and the leg sections spreading wider apart. The cross was custom-made to fit Mary's torso length, arm length, and leg length. The straight metal arm and leg sections each had four restraint straps to securely hold the divorcee's extremities still, while the central section had two straps, one below the breasts and one across the waist.

As Mary stood surrendering to those who would eat her, her now wet body was suddenly grabbed from behind by a team of eight guards who quickly slammed her on her back against the thin titanium cross and rapidly strapped the naked 38-year-old into a modified spread-eagle positioned. Once Mary was strapped tightly to it, the cross was lifted upright and secured to a steel post to one side of the stage. As Mary's chest anxiously heaved, Lawrence addressed her.

"Mary, in a short while you will be gutted alive and your body placed in a roasting pit. Your compliance and cooperation has been sincerely appreciated, and I want you to know that. Unfortunately Mary, there is a severe food shortage here on Edo, and for that reason my request to spare your family members has been denied."

With those words Mary began to sob hysterically. "No, no, Please, please, you promised, Mr. Lawrence, you promised sir, you gave me your word" she pleaded through tears which now dripped down across her smooth, naked body. As Mary continued to scream hysterically, a ball gag was tightly strapped deep into her widespread mouth.

As Mary wailed into her ball gag she saw the doors at the back of the banquet hall fly open as four guards carried her naked, 36-year-old sister kicking and screaming into the auditorium-like a room. Toned, athletic Beth was physically carried up on stage and laid back against her very own custom-fitted X shaped restraint cross which awaited her on the stage floor. Her dark hair was boyishly short and her pussy was already shaved bare. No further prep was performed on her.

"No, no, please don't do this to me" Beth screamed as she struggled while guards held her spread eagle onto the cross and began strapping her down. Her cross was then carried next to Mary's and bolted upright, and a technician placed a ball gag in her mouth, strapping it firmly behind her head. The two sisters now hung facing the audience, but also positioned so that they could see the activity on stage.

As butchers and cooks continued to move about with preparations, Lawrence spoke again to the audience.

"The two Earth women you see submissively spread before you, have each given birth to two human offspring. As a special treat for you this evening, here on this festive occasion here on the Feast of Yeomi, I'm pleased to inform you that we have abducted and freshly teleported all four of their offspring, you'll have the privilege of dining on them this evening."

With these words Beth began to flail her head and scream into her ball gag as the crowd applauded Lawrence.

"Also, as another special treat for you this evening, I've arranged the proceedings so that the human mothers will witness the processing of their offspring. On top of that, two of them are fine teenage bucks, and I know many of you will enjoy witnessing their castration."

As the somewhat inebriated crowd roared with approval, rivers of tears flowed down Beth and Mary's faces, as they strained to speak to one another with their eyes.

"We also have a beautiful 13-year-old human female virgin for your holiday dining pleasure" Lawrence added, clearly trying to keep the atmosphere festive.

At that moment the rear hall doors opened and Hal and Ron were hustled naked toward the stage as the crowd cheered their arrival. As the teenagers were paraded through the crowd, several inebriated Edwardian women reached out and fondled their genitals.

Upon reaching the stage the guards placed the boys down on their backs and strapped them each to an X cross, just as their mothers had been. Their crosses were not erected next to their mothers, but were bolted to steel posts on the other side of the stage. All four crosses were slightly angled so that the mothers' and sons' had a clear view of each other. As the two cousins hung spread-wide on the cross, their manhood hanging between their legs, female prep technicians proceeded to shave their balls, anuses, pubic mounds, and underarms. One technician used scissors to crudely chop Ron's long blond surfer hair off to a ragged, short cut. Hal's flat-top was left alone.

Once the boys were completely shaved neck-down, their smooth bodies were quickly hand washed with soapy white hand towels. Hal and Ron were then ball gagged as Lawrence spoke to the crowd.

"Beth and Mary will be forced to witness the complete processing of all four of their children before they themselves are processed. The teenage males will be slaughtered first, and their mothers will be forced to witness everything, their total castration included."

With these words the crowd applauded in approval as Ron's and Hal's bulging eyes held the eerie look of nightmarish horror. As Lawrence stepped back off the stage, the female shaving technicians, now armed with strange-looking clear-glass pipes with suction tubing trailing from one end, approached the gagged teenagers. Each of their penises was sucked deep into one of the glass vacuum tubes, tightly pulling it away from the body. Another slightly wider glass vacuum tube was placed over each boy's scrotum and his total ball-sack was forcefully sucked far down the tube as it tightly cupped the base of his pelvis. The vacuum effect of each tube was such that the technician could pull the glass-encased, shaved organ away from its spread-open root without losing suction.

Several dozen Edwardian women and men from the audience approached the stage to get a better look as a female Edwardian butcher stepped in front of Ron and pulled a long straight-razor from her belt sheath with her right hand. As the handsome, tan-lined, 16-year-old's eyes bulged with terror, the butcher pulled Ron's glass penis tube tightly from his pelvis with her left hand as his chest heaved with rapid breathing.

As Mary screamed into her ball-gag the alien butcher then sliced Ron's cock off at its root with one stroke of the razor. She quickly proceeded to cut Ron's vacuum-sucked scrotum clean off with several horizontal sawing motions. The butcher then methodically ran the long razor deeply from Ron's chest down to his shaved pubes as the teen screamed his final words into his ball gag.

Ron was left to be gutted by an assistant as the butcher moved on to a paralyzingly terrified Hal. Looking the 15-year-old in the eye, the butcher pulled tightly on his cock-tube with one hand as she cut his off his dick with the other. She then castrated his ball-sack with a several deliberate slices of the long razor. Then making a clean slice down his torso and through his navel, the Edwardian butcher began to gut the boy as his mother witnessed the unspeakable horror.

Once they were completely gutted and their anuses carefully cut out, the spread-eagled teenagers were beheaded with a laser chain-saw and their carcasses were hosed off. Guards unbolted their crosses and carried their still-strapped-down carcasses to separate roasting pits.

As the stage floor was hosed off and mopped, doors opened at the back of the hall and 13-year-old Britney and 14-year-old Meg were led in by guards. Meg was still naked from the previous forced rape by her brother. 13-year-old Britney still wore the one-piece bathing suit she had put on that morning. The girls began to cry as they saw their gagged and spread mothers appearing crucified on the stage. They had no idea that their gagged mothers had just witnessed the brutal slaughter of their sons.

Meg was taken directly to a titanium X cross, which lay on stage with its straps open, and was quickly strapped to it. Her mouth was tightly ball-gagged as guards erected her cross exactly were Ron's had been, in full view of her mother. Once it was bolted in place, prep technicians began shaving her pussy of its soft brown fur as she hung spread eagle.

As Meg was being prepared, Lawrence took Britney by the hand and led her to the front of the stage, facing the audience.

"Britney" he said aloud, addressing the audience in a faux voice of kindness "do you see your mother over there? Do you know why she's being treated that way?"

Britney shook her head "no."

"She's being treated that way, Britney, because you've been a bad girl."

As Lawrence spoke a guard set a chair on the stage behind him, while another guard handed him an 18-inch-long hardwood ruler.

"Britney, do you know what they do to bad boys and girls here on Edo?" Lawrence inquired as he showed her the ruler.

Britney didn't answer as her lower lip curled and tears ran down her cheeks.

"Britney, up to their 14th birthday, boys and girls on Edo get a paddle on their bare bottom when they misbehave. How old are you, Britney?"

"Thirteen" Britney replied as face twisted up to sob.

Lawrence, smiling to the audience, said "Well, I must admit, bad girls on Edo probably don't get paddled in front of 200 witnesses" drawing a squealy response of approval from the rather lubricated Edwardian throng.

"Britney, touch your toes" Lawrence commanded as the girl obediently bent at the waist. Lawrence laid three sound swats of the paddle across Britney's butt as her crying voice quivered with the sound of pain.

"This just isn't going to work against your swimsuit, young lady" Lawrence declared to the crowd as he had Britney stand up and face the audience once again.

"Britney, strip young lady, right now" he said as he slapped the ruler into his opposing palm.

As her gagged aunt, Mom and cousin watched from the cross, and as 200 Edwardians stared in total silence, Britney slipped the one-piece swimsuit off her shoulders and pulled her arms out of it. As tears ran down her cheeks and her face contorted, the 13-year-old pulled the swimsuit over her butt and down to her ankles, stepping out of it as Lawrence took a seat behind her. Britney now stood humiliatingly naked before the crowd, her young breasts little more than small, swollen areola; a wisp of soft brown pubic hair faintly hiding her feminine slit.

"Over my lap" Lawrence ordered in a firm voice as Britney obediently lay across him with her buttocks up.

"I'm going to give you 50 strokes with the ruler across your bottom" he announced as the humiliated young teenager pleaded with him, "and for the first 20 strokes, Britney, you will count them, thanking me for each one. The last 30 I'll deliver in rapid succession, hard and fast."

Then as Lawrence prepared to deliver the first stroke with the ruler in his right hand, he slid his free left hand up under her crotch, lifting her butt higher as he cupped her young pussy.

"One, thank you sir. Two, thank you sir" said Britney as she counted off the whacks of the ruler. At number eleven she broke down sobbing, pleading through her tears that the ruler stung her bottom. Responding to her plea, Lawrence disregarded her counting and accelerated the cadence and intensity of his paddling. As Britney flailed about, Lawrence held her down as her smooth young butt cheeks turned red under his rapid strokes.

As Lawrence was paddling Britney's per bare bottom, technicians with glass tubes similar to those used on the boys approached the now shaved and spread Meg. These tubes were slightly wider than the one's used on the boys. Meg's 14-year-old tits were sucked forcefully into the tubes. A smaller, slightly oval tube was placed completely over her clean shaved vulva and her pussy lips and clit were sucked deep into it.

Once Britney had received all 50 strokes she was forced to stand crying, with her beet-red bottom facing the audience. As she breathed rapid and heavy, sobbing as she rubbed her sore butt cheeks, Lawrence ordered her to place her hands on her head. As she complied, Lawrence addressed the 5 ft. tall 13-year-old as if he were talking to a condemned prisoner. As he spoke in a clear, deliberate voice, technicians were setting up a small platform on the stage directly next to her.

"Britney, do you know what's going to happen next?"

Britney only shook her head "no" as she sobbed, her hands on top of her head.

"Right here Britney, in front of this audience, in front of your mom, in front of your aunt, and in front of your cousin Meg, you're going to get strapped down to this special platform, secured to it by what we refer to here on Edo as a 'rape harness'."

As Britney's face contorted and she sobbed even louder, Lawrence continued "Once you're securely strapped down with the harness, a technician will shave you bare between your legs. While she shaves you, we'll have a drawing to select the winners of our 'door prize' for the men in the audience. Ten Edwardian men will be selected to fuck you, Britney, fuck you as hard as they want, for as long as they want."

As the terrified, 13-year-old virgin sobbed, the audience of aliens whistled and applauded in approval.

As the glass vacuum tubes continued to suck eagerly at Meg's tits and pussy lips, four strong guards grabbed Britney and slapped her back against the rape board. Straps of the rape harness were quickly buckled just below her small tits and low across her waist, while her arms were strapped down tightly at multiple points overhead. Her thighs were adducted, drawn up acutely and strapped down with slightly bent knees spread open just lateral to her underarms. Tethered ankle straps held her feet over her head, with her ankles only half as wide apart as her knees. At the foot of the rape board were adjustable sprinters starting blocks, so the men would have something to push against when thrusting. They even had cushioned elbow rests and knee pads.

As Britney's pussy was shaved bare, the ten excited 'door-prize-winning' businessmen lined up on stage and began to strip. Although several of them were already excited to erection, technicians offered erection-stimulant injections, and all 10 took up the offer. Edwardian penises were about the same size as human penises, but upon becoming erect, the glans, or head, of the Edo penis would swell a little more than a human one, looking somewhat like a knob at the end of a shaft.

As the first Edwardian pushed his hard, bulbous shaft against Britney's resisting maidenhead, the same butcher who had castrated the boys approached Meg, whose labia and tits were now well-sucked into the glass tubes. As the rapist fucked Britney's tight vagina while she cried, a guard retightened Meg's thigh and shoulder restraints, then released her mouth gag so the audience could hear her final screams.

The rapist now deeply penetrated moaning Britney with full strokes as Meg's chest heaved anxiously as she watched the female butcher in front of her hold up an old-fashioned straight-razor. As Meg screamed for mercy, the butcher, using the glass suction tube has a pattern, neatly cut an oval circle around Meg's vaginal lips as she began to excise the girl's vulva from between her spread legs. As Meg's torso bucked against the straps and she screamed at the top of her lungs, the butcher made careful deep cuts around the suction tube, from the peritoneum up around the glass to the girl's shaved pubic mound. As the strong suction continued to pull her lips out, the butcher completely sliced away Meg's external pussy with the razor.

After Meg's vulva had been completely cut off the butcher quickly changed to a clean, longer razor and began cutting off the 14-year-old's suctioned boobies one at a time, carefully circumscribing the glass breast tubes. One at a time the glass tubes fell free, taking Meg's titties with them. Then, as her mother Mary moaned hysterically into her gag, the Edwardian butcher quickly cut Meg with the razor from her neck down to her pussy in one forceful, determined stroke, and gutted the girl.

As Meg endured her terrible final fate, rapist after rapist pounded deep into Britney as she screamed, her feet strapped up over her shoulders. By the time the final rapist unloaded his semen inside the 13-year-old, technicians had already taken Meg's beheaded carcass to a roasting pit and were cleaning up the floor under her cross.

When the last rapist was finished, Lawrence made an announcement as Britney was unstrapped from the rape harness.

"Ladies and gentlemen, in order to add some variety to this evening's proceedings, I have decided that Britney will now receive 30 strokes of the bullwhip, after which she will be hanged."

Britney, who, from her position on the rape board had not been able to witness Meg's unimaginably gratuitous slaughter, began the babble hysterically upon hearing Lawrence's unbelievably cruel edict.

As a thin, shiny steel cable was lowered from the stage ceiling above, a guard handcuffed Britney's wrists in front of her, immediately attaching the handcuffs to the cable as it rose up once again lifting the teenager off of her toes.

With the guards first stroke of the bullwhip across Britney's girlishly round bottom, she released her bladder, splattering out yellow pee all over the stage floor. Britney's free-hanging, slim young legs flexed and twisted in a vain attempt to block the whip's strokes. As the naked girl drew her knees up to her chest in a hopeless attempt to protect herself, the whipmaster worked the whip up and down her stripped body, horizontally marking the front and back of her torso; the thin leather lash finding its way to her tender white thighs, tits and buttocks.

In a final act of unbelievable cruelty with the whip, to muscular guards grabbed Britney's ankles and drew them a high up, and cuffing them next to her overhead wrists. This hung the girl's wrists in ankles from one central point, forcing her knees to flex apart. In order to secure her knees from closing, the guards then strapped a single long leather belt around each knee and buckled it tight behind Britney's back, effectively locking her thighs open. As Britney gasped for breath, the whipmaster laid his cruelest strokes across the hysterically sobbing 13-year-old's shaved pussy. As he did, another thin steel cable, this one with a loop at the end of it, lowered from the ceiling next to her.

Sobbing to the point of breathlessness, and nearly unconscious from the pain of being bullwhipped naked, Britney was lowered to the floor as her wrists and ankles were unhooked, and her petite, five-foot-tall, whip-marked body was roughly held up to face the audience. Her wrists were then reattached to the ends of a long, narrow 2"x4" board placed behind her shoulders, level with the base of her neck. Once her wrists were attached, fully extended, to this board, the girl appeared crucified, her arms outstretched fully to either side. Leather straps were then added at her shoulders and elbows, firmly holding her outstretched arms to the bar which ran across her back at her shoulder blades.

Young Britney appeared crucified, her now clean-shaven slit clearly visible as she stood, legs together, facing the crowd. As Beth screamed into her gag, a guard slipped the thin cable noose around Britney's neck and tightened it. A second later the cable began to very slowly lift the girl's toes off the floor. As her legs kicked wildly, a final squirt of urine ejected from the girl's slit. For a full five minutes the naked teen twisted and flailed to the delight of the spectators as life was sucked from her in front of her mother.

Once Britney was nearly unconscious, guards to either side of her held the crucifix beam steady with one hand as they spread her legs apart by the ankles with the other. The female butcher then stood in front of the girl, razor in hand, and proceeded to gut Britney and prepare her carcass for roasting.

At this point Beth and Mary's only wish was to die quickly. But it would not be so easy. As the stage was cleaned from Britney slaughter, Lawrence once again addressed the two crucified mothers.

"Beth and Mary, it is now time for you to die. I have decided that you two mothers should undergo a special procedure, whereby, using advanced Edwardian medical technology, you'll be kept fully conscious and alive while we surgically remove, not just her pussy lips, but your vagina and entire female reproductive system. You'll first be given medication to keep you alive and conscious during the entire procedure, and you'll feel every bit of it."

As the women's horrified eyes bulged above the ball gags, they anxiously heaved with rapid breathing as their nipples danced up and down on their chests. As Lawrence spoke, technicians surrounded them, giving them injections and tightening their restraint straps.

"In addition, Mary, you will have you're breasts cut off with a razor. Beth, because of your flat chest, we'll only cut off your nipples. Oh, since you are the last of your group, we're going to remove your ball gags."

Turning to the audience Lawrence announced "Should any of you need them, there are complementary earplugs at each place setting."

Then walking up to spread eagled Beth and staring her in the eye as her ball gag was removed, Lawrence reached out and stroked his fingers across her smooth pussy lips and said simply "Beth, honey, your first."

With this a technicians in a white lab coat stepped between Beth's legs and began to make an incision from her navel down to the upper crack of her pussy as she pleaded for mercy.

"Please don't, please don't do this, I'll do anything, I'll suck you all, you can fuck me all day, please, please don't" Beth begged as blood ran down over her shaved pussy. The female butcher then used the razor to cut an oval area deeply around Beth's entire pussy.

As the butcher's worked to sadistically remove the hysterical woman's vagina, another team of technicians approached Mary and at attached strong clips to each of her nipples and areola, using a screwdriver to firmly clamp them to her tits. These clips were then attached to wires coming from the ceiling overhead, and Mary's big boobs were pulled straight out and up. As her sister Beth screamed in horror as her femininity was cut away next to her, Mary's mouth was ungagged as long syringe needles were pierced through a large breasts as she moaned in resignation. Mary soon joined her sister's high-pitched vocal rendition as the technician then inserted a long syringe needle directly up through her clitoris, followed by a second needle through the opening of her pee hole.

As Beth's completely excised vagina was held up for the crowd, a male Edwardian technician held a razor knife to Mary's large left breast as she, helplessly strapped spread eagle to the cross, uselessly attempted to bargain with him.

"Please sir, please Master, I'll be your total slave, I'll serve you Master, my whole being will serve and worship you Master, Master please don't do this, I'll be your total slave sir" Mary hopelessly pleaded as her huge boob was methodically sliced from her.

As the two sisters screamed an apocalyptic duet, a female butcher using a razor deeply circumscribed Mary's shaved pussy and began slicing off each of her labia, one at a time as the heavyset mom screamed. As Mary continued to undergo her intimate torture, Beth's nightmare was coming to a close has the butcher held each nipple tightly between her thumb and index finger and sliced it off, then quickly sliced the woman's chest and abdomen open with one long vertical stroke of the razor. She then quickly moved on to the now breast-less Mary and performed the same identical maneuver, cutting her from the base of her neck straight down to the crack of her pussy.

As technicians proceeded to gut the spread eagled mothers, the sides of meat made from the carcasses of the teenage boys were remove from the rotisserie oven as an Edwardian chef declared "medium rare" to his assistants.

"Begin serving the guests" Lawrence instructed the chef as he looked at the time, realizing that another group of special abductees was due any minute from Alice Springs. As he glanced at the Edwardian-timed kitchen clock, Lawrence's wrist-pager buzzed with a text message informing him that 23 top executives of ETI, the Edwardian Teleporting monopoly, had just arrived in an adjoining hall for their special annual holiday dinner and entertainment. Lawrence knew it was very 'VIP', and everything had to be 'just right'.

"Yes" Lawrence thought "I have one more important show to host this evening before I can retire to the comforts of my swank, high-tech, luxury Edwardian apartment, and to the full attentions of my two beautiful, live-in slaves."

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This saga will continue in Part Six, where our human underground resistance leader, the Human Processing Center employee "mole" known as "Grey Marleau" will risk his and his family's safety to give us a true but forbidden-by-censorship account of a human celebrity rape-party on Edo, and a mass abduction at a schoolteacher convention in Spain.


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