Notes on Doc's Orders (Special Edition)
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What is "The Hitchhiker's Guide to Slavery?"
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"The Hitchhiker's Guide to Slavery, " was the first of a series called
"Scattered Scenes," an impromptu set of sexually orientated short
stories written for the Internet. They are an artifact of the way in
which I write large stories. I'm not a professional writer, I find it
hard to stay focused on any one piece long enough to finish it.
Worse, I work by trial and error. I could have spent a whole day
writing a scene then discover that there was something about it I
didn't like. Usually I write either another version of the scene or
perhaps replace it completely. The cut material ends up littering my
hard disk as a number of .cut files.
"Scattered Scenes" is a way of reusing this material. Basically I
write a wrapper around the scene, enough new material to make the
scene stand as a story in it's own right. Once done the stories are
posted. The idea is to reuse the work already done without doing too
much extra writing.
What is the Relationship between "Hitchhiker's" and "Doc"
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In March while finishing up "Hitchhiker's" I was involved in a fatal
car crash. This had two immediate effects. First, I was off work and
second I was on powerful pain killing drugs.
"Hitchhiker's" proved quite popular and requests started coming in for
an expanded story or sequel. Having the time I started expanding
"Hitchhiker's.." into a larger work using amongst other things bit's
and pieces of other unfinished stories.
What is a "Special Edition."
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This is a film industry term meaning the version of the film that
contains extra material not in the original release. There may be many
reasons why this material wasn't originally used, the film could be
too long, the scene considered irrelevant. In recent times George
Lucas has extended this concept to include the idea of new material
placed into an older film so that it more perfectly reflects the
director's original vision.
Why "Doc's Orders" the Special Edition?
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When I originally wrote "Doc" I was under some pretty major
medication. (If you have ever been curious as to how Tom Quin writes
when seriously stoned then "Doc" could provide that answer.)
I made what it retrospect were a number of bad edits to incorporate
extra "Scattered Scenes" material into "Doc" which caused the
occasional jump in the dialogue. In addition there were several scenes
that ended up foreshortened because I simply didn't have the
concentration to finish them. As a result I was far from happy with
"Doc" and started looking for a way to improve it.
I'm luckier than most in that my family contains a real life editor in
the form of my eldest sister Emma. While I got to work on expanding
the cut scenes I passed the rest to her to clean up. Unfortunately
doing this sort of thing all day means you don't want to do it at
night on your own time. Emma's progress was glacial.
Then in June she got an option on a book she's been writing and the
progress on "Doc" shifted down to geologic. Which is why now six
months or so after we started we have only just finished.
Emma would like it known that any spark of genius in this manuscript
is probably her's and any fuck ups definately mine. If nothing else
this story shows what a difference a good editor makes.
What about the old version of the story?
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The original version will not be reposted. I request that anyone who
has story on a BBS or website upgrades to this edition as soon as
possible. While there are bound to be people who prefer the original
clunky version, it is the Special Edition that will form the basis for
the forthcoming sequel.
What Pictures are Associated with this story?
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A number of pictures are associated with this story. As stated before
many times the stories are written first, then if a simular picture
turns up I'll use it. As a consquence there may be differences
in costume and bondage between the picture and the text.
These images are available on the binaries pictures groups and on many
web sites.
TARSI067.JPG -- Making Maria "comfortable."
BISH0843.JPG -- Examining Beth
DO1.JPG/BDILL009.JPG -- Slave uniform
BISH00337.JPG -- Kitten the house slave.
0086_36A.JPG -- JoJo and Myra go to town.
BD004.JPG/CLX039.JPG -- Becky bound.
BD031.JPG -- Sandra's turn
BISH0229.JPG -- "Gag that slave!"
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Quin 1997
tmquin@ibm.net
