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Brooke

Part 4

(Brooke had shopped for a car and had offered a special payment for a special deal.  Now she was rushing home to tell her lesbian friend about her adventure.  The next day she would head back to the dealer to pickup her car.)


(Brooke had a little fun with her friend Alice and then went to the dealership the next day.  The dealership felt she owed a little more for the good deal on the car.  First there was some action in the conference room and followed by moving to the salespersons office.)


(Brooke was raped and abused in the sales office and finally let go with her car).



Brooke made her way home after her ordeal and didnt leave her home for three days.  She couldnt sleep and would throw up and suffer shakes.  The thoughts of her ordeal passed through her mind.  She felt the disgust, the anguish of her rape and abuse.  Brooke became closer to her lesbian lover Alice but she could not even tell her of nightmare.


Brooke had a boyfriend, Eduardo.  They had been close but she could no longer deal with a boyfriend.

She broke off the relationship but was worried how he would react.  He was a gang leader and drug dealer. To her relief he took it well and they had parted friends.



Three Months Later


“Come on Brooke, let go out.”  Chided Alice.

“II dont know.” 

“Come on, it will be fun, girls night out.”

The lesbian club was rocking and Brooke and Alice finally were out.  Alice was relieved; it had been so hard d to get Brooke to have fun.  They were drinking and dirty dancing.

They were laughing and having a good time.


“OK, lets have couple up on the stage.” Announced the DJ

“Come on Brooke, lets go”

“What a nice couple.”  “How about a little Kiss?”  Egged on the DJ.

Soon Brooke and Alice were carried away in the moment, kissing groping and swaying back and forth.

The crowd was laughing and cheering.

They danced and drank and partied as the night wore on.


Leaving the club, Brooke was feeling happy for the first time.  Slowly her terrible memories were fading ever so slightly.

“Brooke, such a beautiful, night, lets walkover to the waterfront.”

“Yea sounds nice.”




Walking down an alley they suddenly realized their path was blocked by men. 

“Oh no, just keep walking Alice.”

“Eduardo???” “What are you doing?” “What do you want?”

“Brooke you dumped me and I walked away.” “Now my men see you with a lesbian in public.”

“I dont care about lesbians but when my girl drops me for a girl that is disrespect.”

“Eduardo let us go, we will keep…..”

“AHHHHHHH.” Alice cried out in pain falling to the ground, HER KNEE SMASHED WITH A BASEBALL BAT.

“Ramon WHAT ARE YOU……ahhhh”.

Brooke was cut off as she was pushed to the ground on her knees.

“Shut the fuck up slut.”  Eduardo took his cock out “Start sucking.”

“NOOO, YOU CANT DO THIS.”


Alice was screaming trying to crawl away when the baseball bat came crashing down on her other knee.

She crumpled to the ground in agony.

“Brooke you better start sucking if you dont want to end up like her.”

Brooke took Eduardos cock into her mouth. She was crying in total distress but what else could she do.


Alice started to crawl again pulling herself by her arms when the bat crashed down on her elbow.

Alice collapsed; her screams were now heavy breathing and guttural sounds.  The bat came down on her other elbow.  “Fucking Bitch, now all your limbs match.”

Several of Eduardos gang members stood around Alice and pissed on her face.


“See Brooke what happens when you disrespect me.”

“I have to show that no Bitch can get away with this.”

Eduardo shot his cum over Brookes face.  “Now blow the rest of my gang.  They have to see what happens to a whore.”  Another gang bangers cock was shoved in Brookes mouth.


Alice had a rope tied under her shoulders and she was raised up by light pole.

HER ARMS FLAILED USELESSLY as she had no control with her joints broken.

She looked like a rag down flapping in a childs grasp. A long wooden broom handle was

brought over by one of the gang.  “Shove it up her ASS.”


“NOOOO Brooke screamed.”  Alice began to flap helplessly.  Brooke recoiled as a hand caught her to the back of the head. “Shut the fuck up Bitch.”  Brooke was grabbed by the hair and a cock started to pound her throat.


The broom handle was inserted a few inches into Alices asshole. It was shoved only a little, six inches and then another six. Eduardo went over to Alice , grabbing her by her upper still intact thighs and jammed his cock into her while his gang member shoved the broom handle around her insides.


“The last fuck you are going to get in your pussy is by me.” “You dont mess around with the cartel.”

Eduardo was screwing Alice in her pussy while the broom handle was being pushed slowly in.


“I want to fuck you until the handle comes out your slut mouth.”  The handle was slowly making it way through Alice while Eduardo continues to fuck her.

Brooke was forced to suck one cock after another while her friend was being impaled.

The handled moving slowly while Eduardo got to watch Alices face.


All of sudden the pole pushed way into Alice.  She started to gurgle as it was making its way toward her throat.


Eduardo Smiled.  “The top of the handle is in her throat.”  “OK, pussy eater, get ready.”

Eduardo was fucking her faster and harder.

Gurgle, ugg, ahhh  aaaa .”  Alice could no longer talk.  The handle was slowly pushed upward finally protruding in Alices throat.  Eduardo exploded in Alices pussy.  “Thats your last fucking.”


Several cars pulled up.  A gag was put into Brookes mouth and she was hog tied and thrown into the trunk with the dying Alice.  “Ok, spend a little quality time with your fuck bitch.”  The trunk ride was terror beyond belief for Brooke.  She was with her dying friend in terrible pain and at the same time in fear of her own life. They rocked around the bumpy trunk groaning and gasping.  Brooke wondered if Alice would live through the ride.  She hoped her end would be quick.



The cars pulled into an old barn, Brooke and Alice were still alive.

“Good”, she is still alive .They once again tied up Alice by her shoulders, the broom handles extending out her pussy and past her mouth. 


“Make her suck tit and eat some pussy.”  They dragged Brooke over to her friend.  Suck that tit.

Brooke was gagging and threw up.  Suck on it or you will be next.  Brooke was desperate to live so she sucked on Alices tits and then licked her pussy.   “Thats what you want, making love to your bitch lover.”


Eduardo cut off Alices left nipple.  Here is something to chew on.  He stuffed it into Brookes mouth.

Brooke was gagging.  “Chew it or else.”  Brooke chewed it and swallowed it.

The guys were busy working on something and brought over a saw horse.


Brooke was laid over it with hands and legs extending down the legs of the horse.


They attached her legs and arms WITH BARBED WIRE covering the calf and forearms.

The wire dug cruelly into her skin.

Brooke knew now, her end was approaching also.   She screamed but couldnt pull or fight or the barbed wire would rip into her skin.   Brooke was now draped over the horse held by barbed wire on her arms and legs


Almost immediately she felt cock invading her asshole.  She was being fucked hard, her ass was being rocked.  She struggled to not move but the pounding forced her arms and legs to move tearing terribly against the barbed wire.


“YEA YEA FUCK THAT ASS.  FUCK IT. FUCK IT. FUCK IT HARD.!!!!!!”

Brooke was screaming.  “Scream you cunt.  Yea look at her bleed.”

The wire was shredding the skin on her arms and legs.


Alice was glassy eyed. She was in shock and looked like was in a trance.


Eduardo would have none of that.  He slapped her across the face but she barely responded.

“Get that fucking grill going Fuck this shit   Lets wake this bitch up“

A charcoal grill with now red coals was rolled over.

“OK Alice time to burn a little.”

He placed a hot coal against Alices remaining nipple.

Alice shot up, startled back to consciousness, smelling her burning flesh.

“Glad to see you back with.” Spitting in her face,  “You pussy eating Whore.”


“Lets see how hot your pussy can get.”  The smell of burning flesh again wafted up.

Alices body responded in a grotesque fashion.  Her torso twisted and turned.


Eduardo was fascinated by Alice.  He got his face real close to her face so he could see into her eyes.

Smiling her brought a red coal up to her face.  Placing the coal against her lower lip he was captivated by the pain in her face.  She tried to twist her impaled head to one side and then the other.

He worked slowly along the lower lip, throwing away a coal as it cooled to keep a fresh hot one at work.



Eduardo moved slowly watching the skin burn away.  He was so hard, never before this sexually aroused.

Eduardo began to rub up against Alice with his throbbing cock.    Finally gurgling and coughing Alice seemed to slip away.  She was gone and Eduardo satisfied himself shooting his cum on her dead body. 


All of Eduardos gang had screwed Brooke.  Her asshole was dripping with cum. 

“Take her off the horse, time for something different."

As the barbed wire was removed from Brookes calves and fore arms the extent of the damage was apparent.  The barbed wire was coated with flesh and blood.  The skin and some flesh were ripped away.

It was a raw bloody mess.


“Brooke Id like to fuck with you for the weekend but I have a drug buy to make tomorrow so lets get on with it.


“NAIL HER TO THE POLE.”  Brooke was slammed up against a barn pole.  Her arms were stretched up and Eduardo took a hammer with large sinker nails.  Three guys were holding Brooke tight as she struggled.  Eduardo held the tip of the nail against her palm so she could feel what was to come.


He hammered lightly at first just breaking the skin, then deep finally through the hand into the wood.

He hammered hard until the nail was halfway into the pole. Now the nail was hammered from the side until it bent over finally flattening out against Brookes palm.  With one hand secured he moved to the next.

Again he hammered slowly tormenting her with the tip of the nail.



Next he took a piece of the bloody barbed wire and wrapped it around her forehead past her arms and around the pole.  The wire was twisted tight till it bit into her head.  Drops of blood appear over her forehead as the barbed wire bit into the flesh.


Eduardo grabbed Brookes ankle and with a bend in her knee began to nail her ankle to the pole through the side of the ankle.  These nails had much more tissue and tendon to go through.  He hammered slowly letting Brooke wait for each blow.  The sound of breaking bones mixed with Brookes screams of pain.


“Me and my boys are going to fuck you one more time and then good bye.

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.”  Brooke began to scream as Eduardo fucked her as hard as he could pushing and pulling her against the nails and the barbed wire.  Her skinned calves and fore arms burned with exposed skin.

“PLEASE KILL ME PLEASE KILL ME.” 

Eduardo took the most sadistic pleasure in screwing the bitch that had disrespected him.

“How does it feel?”  “Best fuck I ever had.”

The rest of the gang took turns. Until they were all satisfied once again

They were relentless slamming, slapping tormenting.

When done they let her hang there while they ate. 

:Look what we got here.”  Among the other grilled items they had parts of Alice they had sliced off.

“You want a taste of your little slut friend?” Eduardo teased Brooke.  “Here chew on some her pussy.  They forced some of Alice into Brooke.  She gagged spitting it out. 

“Too bad, waste of some good cunt meat.”  Looking over, Brooke could see Alice had been partially butchered .



When they were done eating it was time to go, Business to attend to.

Eduardo brandished a knife in front of Brooke.  He slit her belly, reaching in; he pulled out some of her intestines and let it hand down.   Screaming, twisting, turning Brooke stayed conscious for 15 minutes while Eduardo looked on in captivated by her death throw.   Finally Eduardo came forward and delivered the death blow with his knife across her throat.


His reputation had been avenged.


The End







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