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Subway Ride
Author: Powerone
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(Added on Jun 18, 2002)
(This month 23436 readers) (Total 52301 readers) |
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Magdalena is attacked while on the subway. She is ass fucked by a stranger while others watch as she is abused until they finally join in. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Soomey
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Jul 1, 2007 |
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A story I come back to again and again. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Blue_Monday
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May 2, 2007 |
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Powerone and Magdelena! You can do better! I'm sure this is a great story, but I couldn't get through it because you kept switching POV. Just take a few minutes to clean it up. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Powerone
(Edit) (May 2, 2007)
- This was actually a IM message between Magdelena and myself that I published over 4 years ago. There has been lots of stories and novels since that time, and by readers response written better and I now have a fabulous group of editors to correct these problems. I'm not sure it would be worth the effort to go back over such an old story as editing takes much more than a quick 5 minutes. Hopefully you can find another of my stories that you will like better.
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| Reviewer:
veru_skjava
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Jun 30, 2002 |
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kept my interest for sure, different from authors usual writing style.. enjoyed the concept it was a result of a chat (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mmmmmpain
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Jun 20, 2002 |
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The pain was there. I was so wet after reading this. I felt the clamps were hard but otherwise the fear submission and pain was there along with the total dominance and ultimate punisher (10/10)
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