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Rabbit Island
Author: Aurelius
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(Added on Jun 24, 2002)
(This month 124412 readers) (Total 182404 readers) |
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Beautiful young women are kidnapped and brought to Rabbit Island to satisfy the sporting and sexual appetites of its rich and kinky clientele. Jessica's competitive nature is revealed when she and the other 'beach bunnies' are obliged to participate in some very unusual sports. But life is not all bad for our heroines/victims despite their ever-present handcuffs and other torments. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Jorgy444
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Jul 14, 2012 |
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One of the most well written stories
I have read in quite sometime. Could
do with some proofreading but thoroughly
enjoyed the story. (9/10)
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anjo405
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Jul 29, 2007 |
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Congratulations to author. (10/10)
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evangeline2020
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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Completely unbelievable, but fantastic reading none the less. (10/10)
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spandexbound
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Mar 20, 2005 |
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This story is very well-written and captures (no pun intended) enough of the day-to-day aspects of D/s to really make for a good read.
The author has written other stories which are equally good. It's a real treat to find erotic fiction which is also *good* fiction. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
zephyr
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Mar 16, 2004 |
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It is such a great work, that I can't think of a a way to improve on it. This is one of the stories that you'll end up reading from beginning to end and not regret it. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Jan 4, 2004 |
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"Thumper" should have it so good, plus the island is named after his own kin!
Actually though, this story does tend to drag in spots and stretches the imagination a bit farther than it should prehaps go. Take the character of "Sumi", as an example. Not to belittle any particular race, but this character is described as being Korean, yet also has "round eyes". And there is no mention of Kimchie (sp?) breath that does tend to turn off most Westerners.
All in all, however, "Rabbit Island" is well developed and entertaining. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Aurelius
(Edit) (Jan 4, 2004)
- Thanks for the review, the first this one's had for 14 months. This was my first story and contains mistakes too numerous to mention, so virtually any criticism is valid and useful. However I must say that I've found that many Koreans are far from being slanty-eyed and I don't recollect keeling over at their breath either. :-)
I'll take this moment to steer any new readers to my other story (Even Ponygirls Sometimes Get The Blues), where I think the writing has improved.
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boccaccio2000g
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Nov 24, 2002 |
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Aurelius does a fine job creating his tropical demi-paradise, where, for the delightful bunnies of Rabbit Island, 'Freedom's just another word for nothin' left to lose'.
Among its interesting attractions are a number of sports that sound rewarding enough to drag even the most indolent couch-potato away from his (or her!) ESPN - including any number of freestyle bi-athlons featuring unusually high degrees of difficulty.
The ending was a little weak, I thought; but perhaps that is because it's not really the end?
And for this reader there is altogether too much complicated gadgetry, hardware, accoutrements etc -- necessary to the integrity of the story line, perhaps, but overly challenging to those of use who barely know a Phillips head from a dickhead.
All in all, though, one of the most imaginative stories I've run into around here. Well done. (8/10)
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Kray
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Nov 1, 2002 |
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A great story, well written, very enjoyable, very envolving...
Congratulations Aurelius! (10/10)
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rainee
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Oct 2, 2002 |
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What more could I add that hasn't already been stated below !!! MORE....MORE....MORE !!!! (10/10)
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veru_skjava
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Sep 9, 2002 |
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Excellent story, i read it from the beginning to the end, and loved every minute of it, would love to have stories on jessica and the other bunnies lives, as well as the sold bunnies and ponies, pussie girls, one thing i kept hoping for was a reflection of the week in the "cells" fantastic story indeed. (9/10)
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freefall
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Aug 5, 2002 |
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I've become more and more impressed with the quality of this story, as it has progressed. This writer's style resembles that of other authors I admire, such as "Leviticus" (although slightly less dark), or some of the authors on "Sir Jeff's Ponygirl Site". After 17 chapters, it looks like this story is just starting. I can only hope. (10/10)
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Pooka
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Aug 2, 2002 |
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Such a delightful change of pace from the generally boring 'beat them' and 'screw them' mentality that seems to be popular in BDSM circles! Excellent descriptions of the ponygirl workings, and such fun games for bunnies! I greatly enjoyed this intelligent, fun loving, and sensous tale where women are aren't being treated like some prisoners in some demented meat farm. I have a great respect for stories (and real life situations) where men can dominate without having to raise their fists to get submission from a woman. *grin* (10/10)
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ponytara
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Jun 29, 2002 |
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As this is only the first three chapters of this story, I think it's progressing quite well - location set, many key characters introduced and anticipation building.
(and I'm always going to be favourable to references to ponygirls - and quite a detail description too!) (8/10)
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LadyLibra
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Jun 27, 2002 |
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I think this story will be added to everyones bookshelf! If future chapters written as well as 1-3 are. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aurelius
(Edit) (Jun 27, 2002)
- Thank you kindly. I've just posted the next three chapters and corrected all the typos in the first part!
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LadyLibra
(Edit) (Sep 4, 2002)
- JUST RERATING STORY 10+ very enjoyable & is a keeper!! Aurelius would love to hear about jessica's life before the island, i hope that the pony girls part of the story, Madame Cavallo ideas should be advoided, used in "the old wives tale " maybe!
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| Reviewer:
Gulph
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Jun 26, 2002 |
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Liked it! It's not overwritten like a lot of this stuff and the pacing is nice. I can't recall how many stories I've read in which the "heroine" has a penis in every orifice -- within the first five pages!
Instead, this author has allowed time for a little character development and some anticipation of whatever is to come. I'm looking forward to reading more. (8/10)
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