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Veena Becoming Slave
Author: Ravi Raj
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(Added on Nov 15, 2014)
(This month 37576 readers) (Total 37576 readers) |
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Teacher becoming a slave to student |
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Reviewer:
a.broadsword
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Nov 30, 2014 |
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It's not the worst story on this site but it's right down there in the bottom 5%. Sorting it into paragraphs would be a start as woud finding an English name for an English Teacher, not rocket science my friend although seeing Indian Rocket technology where the rocket gets 50 feet up and explodes then may be it is (1/10)
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Reviewer:
Dokgene
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Nov 20, 2014 |
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The English is so broken it is hard to overcome and finish. (1/10)
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Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Nov 18, 2014 |
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This "story" by not ravi from not Bangalore should have a sign saying "warning: crap ahead" at the start. But the worst part of this gibbersh is the sentence "I will text the next session as early as possible" at the end. Indeed the stuff of nightmares. My average shopping-list is a grand spectacle of flamboyant literature compared to what not ravi from wherever managed here, so, avoid. Unless you like your eyebrows ending up halfway down your neck. JJ (1/10)
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