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Sandra\'s 4 levels of punishment
Author: sandy deigner
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(Added on Jan 5, 2015)
(This month 94967 readers) (Total 94967 readers) |
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Sandra goes through the levels of humiliating punishment from her father in front of her brother and a family friend. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
DominantHacker
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Feb 3, 2015 |
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Agreeing with Curtis, it is a very good story. One place where I thought it could have been better was to prolong each level more, elevating her humiliation. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jan 15, 2015 |
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Contrary to the first two reviewers, I see no need to escalate the violence much, since humiliation seems to be the driver in this story. I do agree with the first reviewer that you oversold the tags, though I recognize that degrees of severity are in the eyes of the beholder. I think 'violent' is marginally applicable and 'serious' is accurate, though 'torture' really seems to be a reach.
There are a few typos, but not enough to ruin my enjoyment of the story. I did find leaving three blank lines between every paragraph bothered me, so I copied the story over and reduced them to one, but that's just me.
Most importantly for a porn story, you did a great job of selling/telling the climactic sex scene. The buildup was good, and the actual sex was hot, which is about all I can ask. I don't keep a Bookshelf (or whatever they call it) on this site, but if I did your story would be on it. Excellent first story post.
Oh, and I don't think you need to stick with the 'levels of punishment' theme in future installments, as the final paragraph adequately signals that the story is about to veer into a different direction. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
andersbac
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Jan 7, 2015 |
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<br /><b>Warning</b>: Function eregi_replace() is deprecated in <b>/home/bdsmlibr/public_html/stories/review_edit.php</b> on line <b>43</b><br />A very well written story, that deserves an instant continuation. Sandra's humiliation and inner feelings were very well described. I would like to see much more of that in her future, as well as much more harsh physical punishments. Perhaps there are many more levels of punishment in Sandra's future that neither she or we (her fans) are aware of? (9/10)
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d1ll1gaf
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Jan 6, 2015 |
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This story is extremely well written, with each and every moment described clearly enough for a reader to visualize in their mind as they read it. Sandra's humiliation is very prominent in the story and both her feelings as well as those of the men around her are communicated to the reader.
My only disappointment was that the content of the story does not correspond with the tag's selected to describe it. Specifically the author choose to tag the story as being violent, serious, and containing torture. All of these would suggest that the story contain's significantly more pain infliction that a pussy whipping with a belt, however that is all of the violence / torture contained in the story.
Personally I would have liked to see more violence directed at Sandra (i.e. have her father spank her with his belt at level 2, tit whip her at level 3, etc) and have the sexual components begin earlier as well as it would serve to humiliate her even more.
All in all a 9/10 and I will be looking for more stories from this author. Maybe if I am lucky the author will even add more stages of punishment for Sandra where she will really suffer. (9/10)
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