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The Library Crawl
Author: Zenmackie
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(Added on Jan 28, 2015)
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Patty follows her Master\'s orders in the Public Library. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Feb 11, 2015 |
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Enjoyable and fairly believable. I did have a couple of problems with the narrative, though. In one place Patty's been crawling away from her jacket for awhile, but when she looks back it's right by her feet. Also, she's wearing panties, but he's able to fuck her apparently without removing or shifting them. Still, a sexy read. (8/10)
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kiryous
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Feb 9, 2015 |
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very nice. well done would like to read more. (7/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 29, 2015 |
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Short, very nicely written story with a high percentage of credibility.
Descriptions of Patti's train of thought are spot-on, too.
The Mackie in Zen mode. Great.
Gonna dig up Ol' Blue Eyes and make him sing 'Mack The Zen'.
Or should that be 'Zen The Knife'?
I'll have to think about that... (10/10)
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