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Enslaved by my Daughter
Author: Carrie Walker
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(Added on Mar 15, 2015)
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Cassandra, a successful lawyer, is taken by surprise by her daughter Carrie, and turned into a complete slave. She is eventually humiliated, exposed to her family, her friends and neighbors her fellow employees at the law firm where she is employed. She is ultimately further and further humiliated and degraded, until Carrie has taken her entire life away from her. I am Carrie, the daughter, and my mother is my slave property in real life. many of the things in the story really happened. But this is not the way it actually happened, it is really an early fantasy of mine, from \"before\", about how it MIGHT happen. |
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| Reviewer:
dietkola
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Jun 21, 2016 |
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Fantastic story and imagination too.. Well written and worth reading!! Looking forward to next chapters! (9/10)
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KathyYes
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Mar 23, 2016 |
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I love the details here, and the writing is quite good, far above much here. I look forward to the next installment. (8/10)
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EMMETT6732
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Feb 2, 2016 |
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Excellent writing would be interested in a sequel. (9/10)
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Denkira
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Jun 13, 2015 |
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Very nice, looking forward to new parts! (9/10)
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patient718
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Mar 20, 2015 |
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A strong start to this story. I think that it will have "legs" and am looking forward to future installments. (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Mar 18, 2015 |
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Not a bad start. But as ever, the 'revelation' of 'the plot', i.e. the taking over of Cassandra's life by her daughter, is way too brusque.
You can't walk up to someone and say "as of now you're my slave" and everything falls into place. It doesn't work that way, not even in a make-believe environment.
This being said, the writing skills seem to be there, as is a certain feel for coming up with a story (I hope), so let's keep an eye out and see where Carrie Walker takes us in further installments.
JJ (7/10)
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woolfighter
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Mar 17, 2015 |
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This first part starts slow, but looks promising.
I hope the sequels will develop the plot at her work place, with her relatives; not just this mild home exposure. (8/10)
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