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Timothy
Author: Jane Marwood
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(Added on Jul 3, 2002)
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Timothy's mother is ill and nineteen year old Hazel is sent to look after him. After a humiliating school medical Hazel is in charge of supervising the boy to his total chagrin. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
rocketXpert
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Apr 28, 2012 |
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"Jane Marwood" is my favorite author of erotica. Poor Timothy. He can't seem to encounter a single female who might object of the treatment he receives. It's a little depressing that Susan would prefer to forsake her friendship with him in favor of treating him like a sex toy. But you would think his own mother at least might not be so happy with what�s been going on during her absence. Of course, the rational side of me can�t condone what happens to him and wishes he could find some escape from his situation, but another part of me wishes I could be Timothy.
I could be wrong, but it feels like perhaps this story has reached its conclusion. I must say I'm disappointed that the idea of Gail planning on marrying Timothy was never developed further. It would have been intriguing to see how such a relationship progressed. Instead, we got more of the same old stuff we're used to. Not to say that it wasn�t great. I just feel as though there was a missed opportunity here to do something different. These stories can get a tad repetitive, yet I still never seem to tire of Jane Marwood's work. I don't care how many times I have to read the phrase "There's a good boy"; I just hope this author continues to write.
(8/10)
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- Replied by:
jls152
(Edit) (Jul 8, 2012)
- Good observations and suggestions.
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| Reviewer:
Aerocaps
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Aug 1, 2011 |
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This is the best story -true I hope (...)- I ever read!!
Dislike repetitive “there is a good boy“ etc.., “Aaarrrggghhh“ (prefering “Ahhhhhh“ or Mmmhhh...“ who makes a little less virile), spanking parts, every things that makes the medical ambiance less credible. I am customizing that text to go further than this, removing/adding some parts. I search someone to correct my bad english. Am I allowed to publish it..?
Dominique (9/10)
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SensoryOverlord
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Dec 30, 2010 |
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Lots of fun reading this excellent humiliation tale. However I do think it's quite repetitive and could do with less 'same old', more variety. Wouldn't it have been interesting if variations on his treatment were tried? For instance, a week of two of Timothy being regularly stimulated but NOT allowed to orgasm? Perhaps to see whether his treatment has caused any change in his 'idle' semen output. Also, all the better to give him a chance to be caught masturbating. Not to mention the problems at school with the likely permanent erection. Another idea that could have been explored more was the 'irrigator', set to just below the level that would cause ejaculation. Also with all that prostate conditioning, would mere penile stimulation alone be sufficient now?
More exploration of his new relationship with his mother?
And why does *every* woman he encounters have exactly the same ideas of how to manage him? None think he'd either be worth fucking, or some pussy-play, or deserves some serious denial time? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aerocaps
(Edit) (Aug 1, 2011)
- Thank you, I agree COMPLETELY with every things wrote SensoryOverlord!
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jls152
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May 30, 2010 |
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Jane, your Timothy story is one of the very best humiliation stories I have read and enjoyed. You might consider releasing an illustrated publication on this story, and maybe modifying the ending. ie. a year later, or a fortnight later when he actually attends the school and interacts with those who saw him. :) (10/10)
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XNeedUX
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Mar 14, 2010 |
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Awesome job (10/10)
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jip
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Feb 2, 2006 |
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Very good story, but sometimes repeating similar things. Anyway the total result is excellent (8/10)
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oldboy
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May 15, 2005 |
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Oh-my-Gaud, what a story! This was the story that brought me to BDSM. Can't imagine how it can be topped. I spaced it out over a few weeks so as not to finish it too quickly. I loved it, and hated it, that is loved the story, but hated what they were doing to poor Timothy! Written so well that I felt I knew Timothy. Thought about it numbers of times through out the days, as if trying to figure out a way to help Timothy. How could anyone be so cruel? The fact that he was such a nice boy, instead of one who "needed" punishment, really added to my (and Tim's) anguish. Enjoyed the "slow" but packed development. Enjoyed the great length you took in describing all of the details. Added a lot to mention his flushing, the look in his eyes, quivering lips and tears. (Don't like the word "tummy" however, but thats just me, and it didn't detract from the story for me.)The actual ejaculation scenes were very erotic! In a way, I'm hoping his mother will return and turn the tables on his tormentors, but then that would end the story, wouldn't it? Hate to think of his life being planned by/with those women. The fact that I'm thinking so much about the story, to me, is a mark of great story telling. Please keep up the excellent work! Looking forward to reading your other stories. (10/10)
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merway22
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Apr 25, 2005 |
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Excellent (10/10)
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Wallie
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Apr 15, 2005 |
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Please note: This is my first attempt at reviewing a story.
"Timothy" is the best story I've ever read. I most enjoyed the descriptions of the charactors and the positions they are placed in, especially the scenes in wich Timothy is bathed. My favorite charactor is Hazel because she's so neat and clean, so assertive, and so beautiful. Please continue this story. Please try to post new chapters more often, once a month would be nice. (10/10)
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Gabhorn
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Apr 9, 2005 |
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My only complaint is that the chapters are too few and too far between. Thanks to Jane that at last we have a new chapter. Excellent!!!!! (10/10)
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subreader
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Sep 15, 2004 |
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This standard of work deserves recognition. Not just for this story, but for all your stories. Writing standard that is more than a cut above the rest. Posted for free... and updated at last thank goodness. Please don't be too long before we get more. (10/10)
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fernakkapan
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Sep 14, 2004 |
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Dear Ms Marwood, you have only one flaw, you don't post quickly enough. I would love to be able to read more of your work, more often.
Excellent, it really is the best. (10/10)
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buzby
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Sep 13, 2004 |
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ooh so good
I dont know who I would like to be most tomothy,richard, peter or stephen i love all your stories (10/10)
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pet10
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Sep 12, 2004 |
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It is a good storie, Marwood is brilliant, but 17 year old Timothy would be better. (9/10)
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litercrit
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Jan 12, 2004 |
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I have just had the greatest time reading all the Jane Marwood stories. I wish that there was more of her writing it's the best femdom/malesub I have read. Got to give all three stories 10/10 (10/10)
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kittenfemme
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Dec 15, 2003 |
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I usually don't read F/m stories, but a friend said I had to read this one. He was right. This is fantastic work. I might have been bothered by the boy's age if I hadn't become involved in sex and kink at that age msyelf. As such, I shrugged that aspect off and enjoyed the read very much. (9/10)
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abitbent
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Oct 20, 2003 |
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Well written indeed. It was easy to get in the mind of the main character which keeps me hard and dripping for sure, however the fact that this boy was only 14 turned me off. If I could have kept that image out of my mind, it would have scored higher with me. Still, it's big on grammar and content which puts it into an elite on this board. (8/10)
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happycrops
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Sep 1, 2002 |
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I was absoulutely gobsmacked by the story, read it three times right off. Hope you write Timothy's whole life story, it's gonna be some woman to be a wife to him after his teenage experiences ain't it. Such a shame when you see it's had so many readers that so few bother to comment when a story really stands out so much. (10/10)
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janan3s
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Jul 11, 2002 |
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The stories of Jane Marwood belong to the most erotic I know. The part of "richard" in which he is examined by the doctor and her assistants is a genuine classic.
"Timothy" is very promising too. I particularly like the part where his nieces are allowed to examine his prick.
But there is also something to improve: the way things are described. I see certain descriptions coming back all the time. For example: almost all women say: "There's a good boy". It is of course a rather humiliating sentence, but there are more ways to say that. Try to be more inventive, more variable.
For the rest: keep on going! I can't wait to read more.... (10/10)
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Taisho
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Jul 6, 2002 |
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Shaping up to be another classic like 'The Governess'... (10/10)
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karin7
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Jul 4, 2002 |
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A little slow paced, but it's really good. Can hardly wait for next installment. Perhaps the best story I read on this site. (10/10)
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