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Breakfast
Author: syndie
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(Added on Jul 9, 2002)
(This month 8277 readers) (Total 18425 readers) |
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Her first morning with Master brings more than just just eggs and coffee. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 25, 2006 |
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good story but no real shock value but enjoyable to read (6/10)
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BigCat
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Jun 18, 2005 |
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Very good writing skills. Extremely florid and passionate. Personally, didn't like the setting and the brutishness of the D, but that's my thing. Loved the whisk though. A wonderfuly clever instrument, isn't it? (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Jul 11, 2002 |
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I almost stopped reading after the first attempt at writing a sentence failed miserably and then the dreaded capitalization fetish took over. But before I lost consciousness I was jolted out of my saccharin-induced daze for a brief moment by the arrival of the master upon the scene. However he proved to be boorish and totally shallow as only the typical master figure seems to be in stories like this. So at that point I stopped reading. I don't think I missed too much. (5/10)
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