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The Lifestyle Farmer (an Awakening)
Author: Honorius
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(Added on Feb 27, 2016)
(This month 68891 readers) (Total 68891 readers) |
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Jake, a frustrated and wealthy dominant, is introduced to the Group; a powerful and secret society of slave owners. The story charts his journey into taking his own slaves |
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Average (?): (8.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
Ponylover
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May 5, 2016 |
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I love to read and re-read this story. Castrating Trooper is an interesting twist. Maybe only having removed one the fear of loosing the last would be very motivating. I do enjoy the truly terrifying nature of this tale in that it could easily happen to nearly anyone. The random cruelty is exciting, as a piece of fiction. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
graymangazer
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Mar 12, 2016 |
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<br /><b>Warning</b>: Function eregi_replace() is deprecated in <b>/home/bdsmlibr/public_html/stories/review_add.php</b> on line <b>40</b><br />I read this story some time ago, hopefully it's just a reposting here. As for the story: I'm not quite sure? The whole concept made me feel very uncomfortable but strangely fascinated. It's extremely cruel and contains some things that I really don't like. Having Trooper castrated and the removal of his tongue are a step too far, much more erotic to have him breed with his own daughters and of course forcibly lick them, the same with the females having to suck him. But it's not my story so I can't say what's right or wrong. Overall, a nasty idea but very well written and described and any story that tempts me to read it more than once (four times actually) deserves a ten in my book. Now I really want to see what evil ideas you add to it. Hopefully we'll see more soon. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Honorius
(Edit) (Mar 28, 2016)
- Thank you very much for such a great rating and, more importantly, such an intelligent review. I am very glad the story makes you uncomfortable (my stuff has that effect on me too) because that is exactly what I am aiming at. I try to write material that is very dark, but hopefully erotic too, something that makes the reader wonder why they find it so. That's the reason I did what I did to Trooper instead of the (in my view) predictable forced incest route. It's not the mutilation that is erotic (at least to me), but the demonstration of power and helplessness it constitutes. Anyway, I'll stop waffling - thanks again. Honorius.
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Reviewer:
tellmeyourstory
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Mar 11, 2016 |
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Wow! This is a fabulous start to a story! Well written and I love the setup of the main character, I.e. Nerd turned IT millionaire living a life of leisure. Please continue! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Honorius
(Edit) (Mar 28, 2016)
- Thanks very much - feedback is always appreciated! I will be uploading the next instalment shortly, but don't know how long it'll be before it appears. I'm continuing to work on the story, but it's a long process for me so please be patient. Honorius
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