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Lemonade From Lemons
Author: Adam West
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(Added on Mar 20, 2016)
(This month 61375 readers) (Total 61375 readers) |
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A hard working wife comes home early to find her husband and neighbor 69’ing it on the family room floor. Their actions bring surprising, but not truly unexpected consequences, given their past and current history. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
darwin
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May 3, 2016 |
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This is a very well-written story; so much so, that I enjoyed it even though F/m isn't my cup of tea (the writing and the F/f parts are strong enough to carry this story). The end of part 3 has a finality to it that could be the end of this story--but I hope not! I'm eager to read more.
My only quibble was Evelyn's line in Part 3 (towards the end) “You’re preventing me from enjoying one of my favorite things right now.” I think dominants take what they want -- which, just saying, also would have been an opportunity to insert more sex. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
graymangazer
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Apr 10, 2016 |
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Well written and nicely detailed, slow build up with good characterization. Now that the stage is set I hope to see Evelyn assert her authority and bring both Hal and Sandy firmly under her heel.
Personally I'd like to see more and increasing domination, along with bondage and lots of humiliation. But that's just my preference. I expect the author has his own ideas. Whatever, I will enjoy seeing where this will go.
It's a nine for now but depending on the next part maybe a ten.
(9/10)
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nasferi
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Mar 20, 2016 |
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nice story write some more please. i personally prefer more sex in a story but still a good read (7/10)
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