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Daddy's Angel
Author: kimberly{P}
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(Added on Jul 15, 2002)
(This month 11338 readers) (Total 26243 readers) |
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Daddy returns home to find how much His lil girl misses Him and give her the love she deserves. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (2/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
LoversDelight82
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Sep 16, 2006 |
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This story is not only pathetically written, but improbably, implausible, and compltely insulting to anyone who can write a half decent story.
And another thing; the codes are there for you to give the reader a little information about what is in store. You selected "Hardcore"?? No, hardcore would have been Daddy coming home and finding the little girl masturbating, tieing her up, whipping her with, dousing vinegar on her wounds, and then covering her body with honey, only to place her in a box filled with red ants while shaving off her head and pulling her fingernails out with a pair of pliers. What you wrote was a poorly written sex fantacy devoid of all character development, plot, and general interest.
If I could rate this any lower, I most certainly would. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Feb 20, 2006 |
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Not quite sure about the age of the girl! Difficult to rate. Could be worked out better I believe. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jun 27, 2003 |
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Utterly lacking in quality or interest. I won't even begin to list faults. A complete rewrite is necessary in this case. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 19, 2003 |
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I thought this was pretty awful at just about every level. Firstly, it is neither about bdsm nor is it a story - it is a short and fairly unimaginative incest fantasy. For me, it has no place in this library. Secondly, the writing style makes it appear as though the author has simply jotted down some notes, not bothering to engage the reader with anything as interesting as characters or plots. I could go on, but what would be the point? Suffice to say that I cannot find anything to recommend this piece. (1/10)
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