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Max's Cafe
Author: Paladin
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(Added on Jul 15, 2002)
(This month 56632 readers) (Total 75659 readers) |
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Travel old route 69 at your peril. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 27, 2004 |
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one of the hardest to read stories i have read, or attempted to, the story had great promise based on the story line, but after that it is long lost (4/10)
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LaJan
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Jul 24, 2002 |
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Very tough to read with the typos and poor grammer. Not written for females, it's a piece written about them but the male perspective makes the women sound foolish. With just the usage of Word for corrections, this story may have gotten better but, as it is, it's long 'chapters' are just awful. Lajan (2/10)
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