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Reunion
Author: subtle
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(Added on Jul 15, 2002)
(This month 9844 readers) (Total 22618 readers) |
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Canes, Clamps and a Condescending Dom...the necessary ingredients for any successful reunion! Please rate the story...I appreciate your feedback! |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 30, 2005 |
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well written, layout out a good story, very recomendable (9/10)
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chksng19
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Dec 26, 2004 |
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Once again, a nice walk in the soul of your character, clear decisions which must be made, and the delemma faced over the answer. A beautiful use of language, culminating in "struck by the
beauty she saw in her humiliation and submission". That turn of phrase is reflective of your skill. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
anguisette
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Dec 23, 2004 |
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A gorgeous little vignette, and a scenario I would enjoy finding myself in, with the right Dom. I want more, yet I appreciate the well-craftedness of the short story. (9/10)
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PBamenda
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Dec 5, 2002 |
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Excellent tension and build-up. Also like the surprise dilemma she's in. So where are these two going? And does that stomach virus mean anything? (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
InternalyDriven
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Aug 9, 2002 |
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What Idealist Soulmate Master's like myself wish for in their mates is a Soulmate, a submissive who knows their feelings without being told of them, and who spontaneously expresses words of endearment, words that acknowledge their Master's unique identity. In short...something "deep and meaningful". The author and I must be sending and receiving at the same wavelength here. Therefore, there's not much to improve on here in the story told. Subtle...I leave you here the D.L. Whited poem "Imagine" to sum things up.<br>Imagine subtle, if you can<br>The silky softness of my hand<br>Trembling lips against your cheek<br>Tender kiss to make you weak<br>Pushing close not asking why<br>Bodies melting with a sigh<br>Burning ache turns into flame<br>As I gently speak your name<br>Begging you to feed the fire<br>With every inch of your desire<br>Breathing deep the smell of lust<br>Crying out with every thrust<br>Then as the waves take us away<br>Together after we shall lay<br>You more woman, I more man<br>Imagine subtle, if you can<br> (7/10)
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Ginger
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Jul 16, 2002 |
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Getting into the submissive mind is something I like to read. Very few authors go there, and I appreciate that in this story. (7/10)
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