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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Switchhitter7
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Mar 9, 2009 |
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I liked it very much. I particularly liked your dealing with menstruation. I don't see that very often. most think that menstruation doesn't exist. I would enjoy some sort of momentum. Some sort of sense that there are things that she would not do earlier in her slavery that she will do after training. Even Keri, who is 11 or 12 is going much to quickly to be ring true. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 7, 2009 |
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Altough an interesting read, I somehow didn't feel 'involved' in the story. altough the writer has gone through many lengths to provide detail, the characters lack substance and depth. Because of the latter, I, as a reader, didn't care whatever happened to Nicole or slut or whoever involved, but kept on reading regardless, in the hope to find the spark that would fire-up the story.
Alas, the spark isn't there and the tale just meanders along like a broad, slow river: the scenery is nice, but the journey is rather boring.
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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just wish it had been nc. but ok never the less (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
gojack10
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Apr 7, 2004 |
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This really was not sensual at all, from the overly jerked off name, Ilsa, to the forced effort to be original with the piercing. Writing is good enough, but the material itself is lame. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
nightskye
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Dec 1, 2003 |
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my only problems are nit picky really
Ilsa..was supposed to be in her 50's..yet she was still on the rag
she'd most likely have gone through menopause by then
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
blackknightofga
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Sep 19, 2003 |
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Great Read held my intrest for the whole story
(8/10)
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redEva
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Sep 10, 2003 |
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even though way to harsh for my taste i keep coming back for more, because it is impeccably written and has truly good storyline. having a little trouble picturing the latest modification - the breast bar, but well ... hehe .. keep up good work (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ponygirl2000
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Sep 10, 2003 |
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i've been reading this story and it's updates since it began and i honestly believe it's still improving. the 'kink level' is a little beyond my personal taste, but the writing and structure is excellent (the odd typos accepted) and to maintain and develop a story of this magnitude is surely not an easy task.
i look forward to the next installment, whenever that will be (9/10)
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sadomaster
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May 8, 2003 |
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i totlay agree with "dimadick" and "Beethovenfan"
but i like it more, its a great story (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Beethovenfan
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Oct 5, 2002 |
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Credit where due. This is developing into a fine work. The author writes well, and in a classic style, at times like the Story of O. Keep up the good work! (8/10)
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dimadick
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Aug 6, 2002 |
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I like this story,it's well writen but needs a sequel to define some parts of the story,that are left underdeveloped(like how Nicole became a slave,what happened after she droped out of school,after the party that her master took her,after the party mistress Lisa took her,or after the initiation of her master as a member of the ring organisation.Keep up the good work,i'm looking forward reading the next part! (7/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Aug 4, 2002 |
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I see that Jinn has adopted Marcus's scoring descriptions! This is a well-written story that I would very likely rate a notch or two higher if the subject matter were more to my taste. One who is more into the more extreme end of the ritualistic master/slave scene, might well score it an 8 or 9. (7/10)
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