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Even Ponygirls Sometimes Get The Blues
Author: Aurelius
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(Added on Oct 19, 2002)
(This month 198216 readers) (Total 382867 readers) |
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More adventures of Jessica and Kate as they attempt to escape their naked and chained imprisonment on Rabbit Island. They are smart girls but somehow their captors always seem to get the upper hand. This time they determined to outwit their so-called Masters. Like the previous story, Rabbit Island, this is a leisurely-paced tale of female bondage, punishment, fulfillment and wicked games, non-consensual but generally light and sexy in tone. The story is being posted as I write it, so any reviews and feedback (good or bad) are welcomed. |
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Jorgy444
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Jul 27, 2012 |
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Thoroughly enjoyed your story, extremely well
written with detail and good build-up of your
characters, cant wait for the final chapters
where are they. A tour de-force! (10/10)
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Amoeba
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Mar 29, 2011 |
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Definately one of the best stories I've found on here so far! I've been obsessing over it for days, and then I get to ch.31 and it's just like, EPIC CLIFFHANGER OF STORY THAT WILL NEVER BE FINISHED (MAYBE?) nooooo :( evil, evil..... but yes, agree with everything in the other reviews, this story just gets better and better. Poor girls! lucky girls! ^.^ please finish! (9/10)
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dac6781
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Jun 12, 2005 |
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Very Interesting (8/10)
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Ruby
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May 7, 2005 |
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This story just keeps getting better and better.
Well written. Always a surprise. Leaves me wanting more like a good serial should.
The characters - their depth of emotion - the insight into their personalities - the torments and pleasure to be endured - all of it - makes me care about Kate and Jessica as if they were close friends. Aurelius, keep up the great work and take your time to tell your story as it keeps evolving. I say that now, cause I've gotten my new chapter fix. In a few weeks, I'll be chomping at the bit to find out if our two beauties will find the happiness they seek.
To your continued success!
All caught up now...and the emotions of the ponygirls are my own. These last chapters are so much more intense and creative. Thanks for giving me a great reward. (Yes, I reward myself for good behavior by reading your stories.)
Bravo on the lateste chapter, lots of fun and am awaiting Alex's big decision.
Chapter 28 - two steps forward, 3 steps back. You, sir, are a big tease. Thanks! (10/10)
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nikita
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May 3, 2005 |
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I have read Molly Weatherly's Carrie's Story and Safe Word. This story is every bit as good. There are some similar situations, but not as graphic as I would have thought. That is a good thing. The story stands on its own without excessive raping, humiliation, etc. You keep reading because you are interested in the characters. Are you a published writer? It would be a pleasure to read more of your stories if they are as well written as this one.
Review of your last chapter (27):
Consistent with the previous chapters, your writing made me see Rabbit Island's beauty with all the characters, their faces, and personalities. The characters and their interactions kept me addicted to the read. Though I like a lot of sexual descriptions in stories, the more sexually humiliating, the better, the way you used sex and humiliation as a counterpoint to the pleasure associated with pain and humiliation for the slaves very erotic and stimulating. The touching parts of the story made me cry real tears about Kate's fate and satisfying conclusion. The possible consequences of going back to La Plata was hair raising to say the least. I want to know if Alex plans to tell Jessica about her parents.
My thoughts on your future chapters:
It would be a disappointment if Jessica decides to stay on Rabbit Island and be Alex's slave companion. It would be too predictable as well as the promise made to her by Alex. It needs to have a twist ending, both negative, sad, as well as positive for the readers. That would really be sadist and masochistic...wouldn't you say? I breathlessly await the next chapter. When will it be ready? (10/10)
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easyrolf
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Apr 24, 2005 |
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Ruby has said all there is to say. I`m addicted to your story! (10/10)
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kijegam
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Apr 15, 2005 |
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I've been meaning to review this for a while. I think it and its predecessor Rabbit Island are great, particularly as ponygirls aren't my thing at all. But the concept and the long term bondage really work for me.
A couple of criticisms: the plot has got a bit rambling. This does not make any individual chapter less enjoyable however. Also some of the heavy pain stuff is too much, but that is maybe just a personal taste. (9/10)
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Engineer
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Apr 10, 2005 |
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One of the upper-level female slavery stories. Having style, interested in not just torturing and sex but also the characters's thoughts, also showing care for the gals. The few minor breaks of logical continuity could be tolerated. ;-) More of it, please!
P.S.: I'm still reading, the story becomes better and better. So I'd uprated it now. (10/10)
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Melinda52
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Apr 10, 2005 |
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Hello again Aurelius :)
Changes are happening all over your story. I still am enjoying reading it. I also found Melinda in here. A ponygirl :) and friend of Jessicas.
The story line keeps me coming back to see where you have taken the characters. You keep putting in place things that change the characters in ways I had not forseen. That makes the story more enjoyable for I can never guess where your taking it.
It sounds like Alex has fallen in love with Jessica, but then again I have thought that one before. It also seems like He is not going to let her go back to her life in New York at the end of the year like he said she could. I am also happy to see that Jessica and her friends are safe back on Rabbit Island. But what are you doing to the Island?? Kate is pregnant? and Riccardo is the father? Hopefully he can claim her and the child. Although with Alex telling him of the child that sets up a line so he is able to do just that.
I wish you well, and that your story keeps on telling it self to you. ;)
Hope to hear from you.
Sincerely
Ms Melinda (10/10)
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Dancing Hateful Thin
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Feb 14, 2005 |
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This is, to my mind, pretty much the best story on the entire site; playful, fun, romantic, sexy, scary. It's just damned good work throughout, and could easily be worked into a publishable novel with just a bit more length. One of the first things that I look for whenever I visit the site for updates. (10/10)
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stormbringer
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Dec 29, 2004 |
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I can't wait to read the end of this story. I don't want to give you ideas but the way you built your characters and your stories, this is really good stuff (10/10)
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annabell
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Dec 14, 2004 |
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this story is seriously AMAZING!! I can't get enough of it. Its very well written with surprisingly realistic characters, i LOVE it. (10/10)
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biged
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Aug 21, 2004 |
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Best pony girl story I have ever read. When will the next chapter be out ? (10/10)
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newwmember
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May 4, 2004 |
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Sorry to rate your story only now. Why I rate 9/10 : One other pony girl story I'm devouring each time an installment i added. Congratulations for your inspiration (9/10)
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Kailee
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Mar 13, 2004 |
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This has been my favorite story. The more I read, the more I want. It has been a very refreshing change compared with some of the material I've read recently. The relationships built between the charactors is outstanding. I can't wait for more. (10/10)
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Kira
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Mar 6, 2004 |
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Very good story, i like the details specialy in the already named part "A Doctor's Appointment" some well choosen extreme parts can make a story only better. Also without them it's great and well writtem. I hope You have much ideas for many parts, love them all maybe. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Aurelius
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2004)
- Thanks very much for the kind review Kira, especially considering it wasn't totally to your taste. The next chapters (14,15,16) will be more severe than what has gone before (it's necessary for the story), but I must confess it isn't as much fun to write.
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Icarium
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Mar 4, 2004 |
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Brilliant! Just brilliant. I have payed for some books with worse plot and characters, nevermind the sex.:P The humour is good, too.
And those new sports you have come up with are great. I hope they will be more of them to come. (10/10)
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julise
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Oct 17, 2003 |
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I too have been a reader of your stories but have failed to review. I do apologize.
The last chapter, "A Doctor's Appointment" is definitely my favorite so far. The relationship between Master Alex and Jessica is incredibly enticing to me and I love the direction it is taking. Each chapter brings a new delight and I enjoy the imagination and creativity of the author. I can't wait for the next chapter! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Aurelius
(Edit) (Oct 18, 2003)
- Thanks julise :-) I appreciate your review, although your apology is really not necessary.
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julise
(Edit) (Jul 23, 2004)
- Aurelius, this story just gets better and BETTER! Please update as soon as you can! I am loving this story. I hope that it NEVER ends. Seriously I love the emotional aspects that you sneak in there with all of the imaginative bondage. Bravo!
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wabbit
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Sep 17, 2003 |
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This reader has long neglected posted a review for this magnificent story, and hopes the Author can forgive my terrible oversight...i have found myself erotically caught up in each sentence of this well written story, and look so foprward to each and every update...i hope it never ends!!! (10/10)
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yohanes_bu
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Sep 10, 2003 |
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amazing i really like this story and i want experience like jessica in my self (9/10)
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mkemse
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Sep 8, 2003 |
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Like the story, but way to wordy, to detailed focus more on their plightand what they are subjected to (8/10)
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Aurelius
(Edit) (Sep 10, 2003)
- Thanks for your advice sorry you find it to wordy I'll try not to use to many words in future.
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ponygirl2000
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Aug 10, 2003 |
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well, i guess i have a slight bias ;)
i've enjoyed both of aurelius' stories, but this more so than its precursor. the thing that is most attractive to me in aurelius' writing is the sense of light-heartedness. this is an author who seems to write for fun, and that makes for enjoyable reading. (9/10)
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Emily
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Jul 7, 2003 |
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I really like this one. Each new scenario just keeps it building and building. Well done! (8/10)
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LadyLibra
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Jun 27, 2003 |
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*Up to Chapt8. WOW!!Only sad part is we might be getting to the end of the story!!*If there was a way to make a Hardback book this would be & a keeper to reread again & again!! <br>Up to the the 4th part just as great as I thought the story would be!!!(only problem is the waiting for more!!!) I keep wondering if anyone else thinks Jessica & another story about a plumbers revenge(mentioned in 1st story) only differance i can find is authors. <br>I was very happy to be able to visit/read more adventures about Rabbit Island Thank You!! Readers may want to check out Rabbit Island but will still enjoy the story!!!! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Aurelius
(Edit) (Jun 28, 2003)
- Great to know you're still reading! Don't worry, Lady Libra, this story has quite a way to go yet.
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john964
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Jun 27, 2003 |
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Great story series these are some of the best I have read in along time though I wish they would come out faster (9/10)
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Aurelius
(Edit) (Jun 27, 2003)
- Thanks for the thumbs-up, John. I also wish the chapters would come out faster ;-)
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smiley010
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Jun 10, 2003 |
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A very good read. More Please (9/10)
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siroco222003
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Jun 1, 2003 |
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one thing previous reviews havent mentioned is the author's sense of humour which is refreshing and not comonly encountered. (10/10)
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veru_skjava
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May 26, 2003 |
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Ohhhhh loved it, thank you for the cells, excellent characterizations. Can't wait to read more!
Ohhhhh incredible updates... (10/10)
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slavegirldiana
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Apr 17, 2003 |
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Loved the story and can't wait to read the next part! (10/10)
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Jonathan
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Apr 2, 2003 |
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Excellent story, well written. One minor quibble. The full moon never rises in
middle of the night. It rises at dusk, sets at dawn, and is up all night (third
quarter moon and older rises after midnight). (8/10)
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alphie712fr
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Jan 15, 2003 |
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Nice story,well written,pleasurable reading. (8/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Oct 27, 2002 |
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I think this story is better written, with more nice touches of language and fewer weak passages than "Rabbit Island" (of which I must confess that I have only read half at this point.) There seems to be a greater sense of narrative drive here, also, compared to the earlier story which seemed to me to develop in rather too leisurely a fashion -- Bondage in Arcadia, so to speak.
I thought that Jessica's adventures on the island to which the two girls escaped were more absorbing (because the characters and events on the second island were a little more natural) than their adventures on Rabbit Island.
Unfortunately, I don't much care for the premise of the first story which carries over, to some extent, here; I'm all for making the best of things and keeping a stiff upper lip (et al)but the docility with which many of the prisoners of Rabbit Island accept their fate takes most of the element of 'danger' out of the tale. And for me, the scent of danger in the air is the spice that attracts me to this genre.
But that's me. An author is certainly free to create his own 'world' and as long as it's more or less logically consistent, it's a bit unfair to criticize the premise of that world.
Once again, here, Aurelius has begun a story that I'm sure many readers will find most entertaining -- Jessica is a real charmer. (8/10)
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Lady Blade
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Oct 27, 2002 |
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I must conquer with all the reveiws of this story so far. While not overly into M/f+ stories, I find both this and the original Rabbit Island truly worth the read. Can't wait to read more of this series. Keep it up!! (9/10)
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rainee
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Oct 21, 2002 |
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Another well written evenly paced story by this author who seems to know how to continue to build upon the story as he writes...Looking very forward to more and more (9/10)
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Oct 20, 2002 |
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I'm not much for M/f stories, but considering the selection here, I thought I'd read this one. I was wonderfully suprised to see this was well written. I'm looking forward to part 2 for sure. (8/10)
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