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Vestal Whore: Communion of Degradation
Author: Toryu
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(Added on Oct 26, 2002)
(This month 353332 readers) (Total 450618 readers) |
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The girl has always dreamed of becoming a lawyer and as such has previously been a quiet but excellent student. After her father is off to a remote & dangerous part of the country, the virgin girl gets raped, and soon finds out that the more abuse & humiliation that is heaped upon her, the hotter & hornier she gets, and soon becomes a big pain slut taking on all comers allowing her tormentors to do the most perverse and painful things to her, not to mention all the gang bangs that she goes through. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Apr 9, 2006 |
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Though often repetitive and littered with spelling errors and/or missing words, this still is top material.
A great read!
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
englishman
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Apr 3, 2005 |
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the absolute best erotic story I've ever read, congratulations toryu88! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ellis
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Jan 13, 2004 |
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Very well constructed and well worth reading. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
toryu88
(Edit) (Nov 11, 2004)
- Thanks for the nice words. More of my stories and the continuation of this one can be found at www.darkfantasylibrary.com
Toryu
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| Reviewer:
Terry Gabriola
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Nov 26, 2002 |
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Agree very much with boccaccio's comments, except that the errors in the English and the credibility strain annoy me rather more. But it's still nicely memorable. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
toryu88
(Edit) (Nov 11, 2004)
- Thanks for the nice words. More of this story as well as others featuring BDSM, degradation and humiliation, body modification and other genres can be found at www.darkfantasylibrary.com
Toryu
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Nov 3, 2002 |
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This is quite a remarkable story. There were four errors in the first half page (use/used; their lot in life/his; cloths/clothes; peasants rose from there/their;) and so I was expecting to find another carelessly written story.
But not so; there were relatively few errors in the rest of the story. What I did find was some of the most vivid writing I have seen here; each of us could take lessons from the author's flair for description. The author's inventiveness in coming up with horrific new ways to abuse the female members of the Falwell clan (yes, folks, this decidedly undevout family is named Falwell)and the other females in the story is also to be commended.
But there were a couple of serious flaws (by my way of thinking); the degree of consensuality/masochism of the principal character strains this reader's credibility far too much. Secondly (and many may view this as a good thing, not a bad thing) this is a very, very long story, but after the first few chapters, it is nearly non-stop rape (often gang-rape) and torture. In a story of this length, a change of pace now and then to flesh out the characters would be desirable. IMO.
That said, the author has a remarkable talent for writing. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
mickydoughty
(Edit) (Nov 8, 2002)
- The part where boccaccio2000g, says "change of pace now and then," I definantly agree with. This stems from my original review when i felt this story could go on and on. It is a lengthy story, but with a change of pace and some devlopment of ideas, rather than "thrusting" in with another sex scene this could have been devloped into several books. Yes, I did say book, as this is defiantly worth publishing. However, I would want the pace slowed down abit, as you can't put this down once you do start reading.
I would agree that it does push the boundaries of credibility when it gets into the releams of consensuality/masochism. Maybe boundaries are crossed and it is difficult to know what we are expected to believe.
Though I stick with my original view and say that this is a fantastic story, hoping it will go on for ever.
- Replied by:
toryu88
(Edit) (Nov 11, 2004)
- Thanks for the nice words. More of this story as well as others featuring BDSM, degradation and humiliation, body modification and other genres can be found at www.darkfantasylibrary.com
Toryu
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| Reviewer:
toryu
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Oct 29, 2002 |
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The story is basically about the conflict between peverse lust and intellect within
a young woman. She finds her over ripe body filled with a sexuality that overpowers
her intellect which fuels an intense self loathing that pushes her to the edge.
She teeters then slowly spins into an abyss of perversion and degradation at the
hands of men in the wilds of Bolivia. She is eagerly degraded along her way by a
fallen priest, an old peverted Japanese, soldiers, and others. These men (and
women) abuse their positions of authority as she falls victim to and willing
participates in her own violation and debasement as a form of penance.
She finds that nothing is too much or enough as she grovels playing the
sluttish whore for man and beast, praying to her new found idol the male
cock.
Other subplots include the rape, degradation, abuse, sexual slavery, bondage
and total domination of those close to her. These would be rescuers and innocents
are reduced to near animal existence by the predators whose hunger was whetted
by her passing.
This might be heavy stuff for some.
I try to delve into what dark things drive some to dominate, but also those
things that sow the seeds of guilt and self hatred twisting minds until
craving degradation, pain and humiliation, some seek out their own slow
demise at the hands of others.
Toryu
Of course I rated the story high, as I wrote it, but objectively, I am passing on
the comments of those that have responded to my work via personal correspondence.
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
toryu88
(Edit) (Nov 11, 2004)
- More of this story as well as others featuring BDSM, degradation and humiliation, body modification and other genres can be found at www.darkfantasylibrary.com
Toryu
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| Reviewer:
mickydoughty
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Oct 27, 2002 |
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Great read. Majority of the story concentrates on a girl and her degradation in the jungle village, then a army camp where she becomes a "bitch" to the dogs that are penned in there.
The author does introduce some other characters later on such as sister and mother of the already punished girl. This could well go on for ever and ever, And hopefully it will. Must admit much better read than some of the BDSM books I've read over the past few months.
well written throughout, but the end does get a little muddled up at the end with a number of the characters having sex. So the action does jump from one to another but if you've been there from the start this doesn't matter. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
toryu88
(Edit) (Nov 11, 2004)
- Thanks for the nice words. More of this story as well as others featuring BDSM, degradation and humiliation, body modification and other genres can be found at www.darkfantasylibrary.com
Toryu
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