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Raping Amanda Bynes and Avril Lavigne
Author: Dave Haugen
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(Added on Nov 8, 2002)
(This month 56195 readers) (Total 124371 readers) |
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Two kidnappers abduct Nickelodeon's Amanda Bynes, and pop-star Avril Lavigne for sex, humiliation, and degradation. To be a continuing series... |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 2, 2005 |
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Good story but so unrealistic it was hard to review, this will never happen, at least not with multiple celebrities, but that is what fantasies are made out of i guess (7/10)
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kisa_NW
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Mar 22, 2003 |
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I've been reading this story for awhile, and it's been great, very humourous. I have to disagree with LiterateReader though, by the beastiality chapter I disliked Amanda, which is an attestment to your writing, because I can't stand Avril Lavigne. Good story! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
DaveH
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2003)
- Thanks Kisa :)
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kimberly
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Mar 22, 2003 |
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Fantastic...your story was captivating. I don't know the girls that the story was about, nor have I seen them on tv ...but it kept me reading, and reading and reading. I enjoyed the "humanity" you placed in your rapist. Seeing him react the way he did to the different situations and emotions was thrilling and at times, even touching. The ending left me a bit cold, as I was looking forward to your rapist getting a taste of Amanda a little deeper, but all in all...Great Job... I look forward to more of your works. :) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
DaveH
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2003)
- Thanks Kimberly :)
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| Reviewer:
Parker
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Mar 22, 2003 |
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Some nice stuff in this story, though I'm not generally fond of stories involving real people. However, I did like the way the narrator played one girl off the other.
(Now that you're done with this one, I hope we will be seeing more of the Bubba story.) (7/10)
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- Replied by:
DaveH
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2003)
- Thanks Parker :)
A lot of people hated the Bubba story, so I'll probably stay away from that and start some new premises.
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Parker
(Edit) (Mar 23, 2003)
- The Bubba story was great! Don't stop it just 'cause a few people don't like it. You should write what you want to write and ignore the critics.
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Silenteyes
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Jan 14, 2003 |
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I can't wait for more of this story to come out! The story I found to be exciting and riviting. The contrast of the story( Avril and Amanda), the casualness (kidnapper), and the "keep you on the edge" makes this story come alive.
Very good! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
DaveH
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2003)
- Thanks Silenteyes :)
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| Reviewer:
LiterateReader
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Dec 28, 2002 |
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I'm not specifically a fan of BDSM, but found this following Amanda Bynes links and enjoyed it very much. The author does a good job of making you dislike Avril and enjoy her humiliation. The 'tenderness' shown to Amanda offsets it nicely. I can't wait for more parts. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
boccaccio2000g
(Edit) (Mar 14, 2003)
- And finally, number one on the top ten ways of telling that you are getting old is:
When you run across a celebrity parody in BDSMLIB and you don't even know who the celebrities are.
:-)
Boccaccio
- Replied by:
DaveH
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2003)
- Thanks Literate Reader :)
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| Reviewer:
ctaker767
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Nov 26, 2002 |
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I disagree with Terry, this story is very well written. I have nothing bad to say about the story. It even gets better as the story continues. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
DaveH
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2003)
- Thanks ctaker767 :)
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| Reviewer:
Terry Gabriola
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Nov 26, 2002 |
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Hope the author got off on this (presumably the other reviewer), coz I sure didn't. (3/10)
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- Replied by:
DaveH
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2003)
- I didn't get off on it either Terry :)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Nov 20, 2002 |
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This story is very much fun to read. The punishment eked out to Ms. Lavigne is perhaps, in my mind, a bit excessive, but she does tend to be a bitch. Very nicely written. I have no complaints. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Nitrofox
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2003)
- It seems the tale is now at an end. A rather dissatisying end, in my opinion, however I cannot think of a better way to end the story. This is an excellent story. Great work.
- Replied by:
DaveH
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2003)
- Thanks Nitrofox :)
The lesson learned from writing this story? Don't write celeb stories...I can do without both legal and death threats lol
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