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Wetcunt's Training
Author: Humil Slut
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(Added on Nov 20, 2002)
(This month 216340 readers) (Total 344937 readers) |
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The step by step account of the degradation and humiliation as wetcunt is molded into a total fuckpig. (somewhat autobiographical) |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
slutpuppy
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Dec 26, 2006 |
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I liked the story very much. Being a submissive and a slave to humilation I could see myself as wetcunt. I can't wait to read more of your writings. Thank you so much. (9/10)
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mkemse
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May 28, 2006 |
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good story but too wordy (6/10)
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Reviewer:
pejanon
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Jun 6, 2005 |
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Oh yes! Humil_Slut knows what is written erotica about: words! Great, creative use of obscenity! (Nothing obscene about the story itself!) It IS redundant but necassary! (9/10)
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compliant
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Feb 11, 2005 |
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i don't know exactly why this is so but i felt your story was written for me. This is exactly how i wanted to be treated by my Master (10/10)
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gojack10
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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"Lift you head cunt and beg to hump that urinal, maybe if you beg well enough, Master will let His pisswhore, humiliation slut hump that urinal." That was the most inspired passage I found here. Not to be a 'fuckpig' about it, I gave the story a rating of 4. (4/10)
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Reviewer:
bernie
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Apr 8, 2004 |
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Awesome writing and story..... keeps the piss whore so well trained, it becomes one!!! Very good intense humilation scenes.... LOVE IT!!! (10/10)
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kittenfemme
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Jun 28, 2003 |
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While I agree with Terry and drake7 to a point, I feel that this story has a fabulous humiliation based plot. I especially liked chapter thirteen. I can't wait for more. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
LordCrop
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Jun 19, 2003 |
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A very good story for the extreme folks such as myself. Some slow areas but very well read. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
don11
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Jun 15, 2003 |
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There is undoubtedly an element of style. However for me the repetition of 'cuntslop' etc got tedious. I gave up after about 4 chapters! (5/10)
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Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Feb 15, 2003 |
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I'm sorry, but I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs. The constant silly name calling and just-plain-strange language were just too much. I agree with Drake7 100% that the writing is hard to follow, and that separate paragraphs would definitely help. Also, in the intro she seemed to realize that she wanted all this humiliation, so why is she ashamed of it in the story? Also, "wetcunt" and "fuckpig" are just completely pathetic names, in my opinion. (2/10)
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Reviewer:
drake7
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Jan 25, 2003 |
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Whew. The storyline seems promising, but the writing is really really hard to follow. Separate paragraphs for separate speakers would help. Better use of paragraphs in general couldn't hurt for that matter. (3/10)
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Silenteyes
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Jan 19, 2003 |
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I love this story soooo much. Everything about this story is wonderful, I have not a bad note to speak of. I can't wait for more. I found that the terminology was extremely different and that was a plus ... not boring or tedious. I also felt I was wetcunt and could feel what she may have been feeling, the fears and the worries and the tendernous of her Master letting her know she will always be safe ...Excellent! You mentioned this story is somewhat autobiographical ... the feelings are there and it shows (10/10)
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kleintje15
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Jan 7, 2003 |
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it was good but didn`t realy like the word use milkbag come on you can do better than that (7/10)
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Reviewer:
peachmellon
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Dec 17, 2002 |
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This Story is AWESOME>> i am enjoying it. The name calling and being able to serve a Master that have TOTAL control is far and beyond desireable.. Looking forward to more of your writings. and THANK YOU so much for sharing it with us.. (10/10)
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Reviewer:
FreeSpirit85
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Dec 5, 2002 |
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Wow! This story felt like is was being directed directly towards me. While the language was sometimes hard to follow, the fantasy was great. It made me wish to be her, be that wetcunt and have that training. The only thing that would make it better was if W/we all could read the reports that wetcunt wrote about her daily "journeys". i wondered though at the end of her trips to the Adult store her Master came, caught her before she fell to an orgasm, and stated that he was always there. This was never clarified, what happened, how did he get there, and so on. Thanks. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
Terry Gabriola
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Nov 26, 2002 |
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so much emphasis on the blunt language that the lack of variation makes it frankly tedious. Credit for trying to get into the mind of the participants. (5/10)
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Reviewer:
BDSM_Tourguide
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Nov 20, 2002 |
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What a neat story. I like the way it seemed to be sort of personal to the author. While the conversation was a little hard to follow, I enjoyed the content. Although, when I saw the title, I very nearly swallowed my tongue laughing. My first story here had a wet cunt as the primary character. (7/10)
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