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Leaving Jim
Author: Mariah H.
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(Added on Nov 4, 2000)
(This month 8867 readers) (Total 12327 readers) |
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It is the letter written to a master from his slave when she knows its time to leave. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jan 9, 2003 |
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This story actually rather appealed to me. It reminds me of a story I once read about a murder, and then the murderer going mad because he thinks he can hear the beating heart of the dead man. Very mysterious, very dark, in my opinion. Several grammar mistakes. More paragraphs are needed. However, I liked it. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Painfully_Yours |
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Nov 6, 2000 |
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Much too esoteric for my tastes. (1/10)
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