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The tent of the Bedouin
Author: Bedouin
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(Added on Nov 6, 2000)
(This month 164125 readers) (Total 252747 readers) |
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Captured, bound and compelled to submit against her will, miel finds her feelings confused when faced with the seemingly merciless Bedouin. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Pflutter
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Dec 13, 2009 |
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Wonderful story, so rich in imagery and mood. I also liked the twists in the plot that kept me guessing. Stirring. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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enjoyable (7/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 18, 2009 |
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Dual feelings here... I must say that the story bears a big analogy with a desert: although a desert never stays the same because of the reshaping and reshifting, it gets boring to look at pretty quickly.
The same goes for this story.
You constantly are waiting for a sandstorm to kick-up the pace, to make something happening, to take away the tediousness of the surroundings, but all you sometimes get is the ripple left behind by a fleeting snake.
A pity, cuz the tale has so much potential.
JJ (5/10)
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laursie
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Mar 4, 2006 |
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This has everything I am looking for. I would compare it to powerone maybe even better. Please dont leave us hanging for long. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
thebedouin
(Edit) (Mar 11, 2006)
- Thank you, laursie. This was written some time ago, I'd be interested to know why you enjoyed it!
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laursie
(Edit) (Mar 13, 2006)
- Not sure how to answer a reply to a review so forgive me if I totally mess up. I realize it was written some time ago. I do go back through the archives and look for stories of this nature. I like the helplessness, fear, pain, and humiliation that she suffers. I like the fact that she is made to submit and that she does not submit easily. Your characters that have some debth. I like that fact that you let us into what each character is thinking and feeling. So many reasons. I wont go into them all but it would be nice if you did go into the story further. I am not a writer. That is painfully obvious but I know what I like. To bad you dont have more stories.
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thebedouin
(Edit) (Mar 14, 2006)
- Thank you again, laursie. A few people are asking for a little more (the person the character miel was based on shouts loudest of all). Your encouragement is welcome.
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kreme
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Mar 13, 2004 |
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This story contains a richness that is sorely lacking in so many stories. The more I read, the more I wanted to read. The setting, the interesting characters...everything held my interest. Although unfinished at this point, I still think it's one of the best! (10/10)
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Wyn
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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Ditto what Moggy said. (8/10)
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lisane
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Oct 18, 2003 |
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Amazing descriptions. i love the style, i love the tale, i love the characters. (10/10)
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Moggy
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May 8, 2003 |
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A well written tale, sensuous and erotic; but as a story, not engaging enough for this reader. Was hoping for more plot and characterization. (7/10)
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anguisette
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Feb 14, 2003 |
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Amazing! Please, please, please write more! (10/10)
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CoffinNail
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Dec 31, 2002 |
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VERY nice, enjoyed this immensely!
--CN (10/10)
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polygrip
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Aug 4, 2002 |
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An exciting and well written story. (9/10)
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mikeg2
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Sep 22, 2001 |
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great story --- more!! (9/10)
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parrot
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Apr 28, 2001 |
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more please (9/10)
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lilann |
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Apr 3, 2001 |
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What a beautiful tale. More please! (10/10)
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booger |
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Mar 17, 2001 |
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Great (10/10)
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tigress |
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Jan 21, 2001 |
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I just read the whole story. i liked very much crystal's character. You should write more about her. Will you add more chapters ? Anyway, it is great fun. Thanks for sharing. tigress (10/10)
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Lucrezia |
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Jan 21, 2001 |
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i have read many of the stories of this site and found this one original. The D/s is intense and miel's feelings well described. i agree with most of the reviews, this story is an excellent one. (10/10)
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ambrosia2 |
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Jan 21, 2001 |
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I went back to the site you mentioned...it was the same site... my rating holds. Second time through makes it no different... constructive critcism can help... please take it as such (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
ambrosia |
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Jan 13, 2001 |
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The opening graphics and Flash animations work well, then the animatioms do nothing to compliment the story. Write this story on a blank piece of paper and then read it.
Eliminate the 'flash' and you have a slow moving one dimensional and predictable story. (3/10)
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- Replied by:
miel (Jan 14, 2001)
- Thank you for your gracious and articulate rating of the story which you seemingly read on a "ghost site". It is quite surprising the Flash animations still works, since the site has been closed for more than a month. The new URL with the Flash animation activated is: http://www.d-termination.cwc.net/BT/BTSITE/BedouinsTent.htm
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| Reviewer:
Kim |
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Jan 6, 2001 |
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A story where nothing happens. Might work for
Sienfield, but it didn't work in this story.
(2/10)
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Thunder |
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Dec 30, 2000 |
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Very original and erotic story. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
fidget{LL} |
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Dec 23, 2000 |
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Like a rich tapestry, Bedouin has woven a fine tale! A high class erotic beauty. May i have more, Sir...please? (10/10)
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lady`imp{SS} |
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Dec 21, 2000 |
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omg i couldnt stop reading it !!!!!!!! pleaseeeeeeeee write more and let me know when its done , thanks for sharing with us !!!!!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
nocturne |
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Dec 18, 2000 |
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What a beautiful website, with an equally beautiful tale to go with it! I found it to be a wonderful story, very breathcatching, and response-evoking throughout. Please, please let us see miel reunited with her Bedouin soon....... ! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Juliette |
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Dec 18, 2000 |
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L'¨¦criture est soign¨¦e et intelligente et l'action nous tient en haleine. L'auteur comprend bien la psychologie des relations D/s et sait comment capter l'attention du lecteur. Une r¨¦ussite en la mati¨¨re, bravo :) (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
pamela |
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Dec 18, 2000 |
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I don't agree with the last comment. It is a very good story, well written, interesting, with a suspense. A great play with the mind. It deserves a 9 or 10. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
ABrunetteWoman |
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Dec 18, 2000 |
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I think it needs a LOT more variety. Tedious is the first word that comes to mind to describe this story and the way it was written. The author
would do well to read stories such as Owned Teacher by Thumb to see how to use situations in an erotic and arousing way. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ksprairiemary |
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Dec 17, 2000 |
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Graphically very pleasing. Needs a few more twists of plot...the unexpected...a touch more variety. The story has potential to go in many wonderful directions. (7/10)
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pouque |
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Dec 16, 2000 |
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This is a special story....one that feels very intimate, erotic and inspiring. It is a treat to long to be with miel on this journey and to wait with longing as Bedouin spins the tale. Encore!!!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
kathryn |
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Dec 15, 2000 |
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very erotic, thank you (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Marquis |
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Dec 14, 2000 |
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Most surprizingly, I read it all through on a computer screen. Very nice indeed ! (10/10)
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B J Master |
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Dec 14, 2000 |
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If you like a bit of torture without any sex, it's ok. I would have preferred to have seen a little more action. I kept expecting something to happen, sooner or later. If that is the suspense that everybody else is referring to, then good luck. Kind of like waiting all year for Christmas only to be told to wait, maybe there will be one the next year. I certainly wouldn't take my time to read the sequel. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
WhiteWolf |
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Dec 10, 2000 |
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At last an excellent story on this site. i did enjoy it. Is there any chance to get more?
The website is quite impressive as well. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Bedouin (Dec 11, 2000)
- Many thanks, WhiteWolf... encouragement spurs me on!
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| Reviewer:
lil`kajira{L_D} |
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Dec 8, 2000 |
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it was wonderful! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
miel (Dec 10, 2000)
- Very kind of you lil`kajira:)
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| Reviewer:
ann |
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Dec 6, 2000 |
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Very hot, and what a suspense ! Impressive !
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
Bedouin (Dec 7, 2000)
- Thank you, ann... most kind
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| Reviewer:
Solene |
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Dec 1, 2000 |
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Very good story of domination/submission. the style is excellent. It is in my opinion, the best i have found on the Net. Please, write more. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Bedouin (Dec 7, 2000)
- Thank you, Solene, a very generous comment
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| Reviewer:
Franck |
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Nov 29, 2000 |
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Well written, interesting, intense. Good job, Bedouin ! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Bedouin (Dec 7, 2000)
- Many thanks, Franck
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| Reviewer:
sweet pain |
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Nov 28, 2000 |
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i love it ....... want more
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- Replied by:
Bedouin (Dec 7, 2000)
- Want more? sweet pain or story?
Thank you
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| Reviewer:
Commander |
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Nov 26, 2000 |
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Great story with an excellent subject matter. Incredibly erotic and compelling. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Bedouin (Dec 7, 2000)
- Thanks Commander, always a gentleman, I hope you and yours are well
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| Reviewer:
Erika |
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Nov 26, 2000 |
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This tale is like the desert, hot, mysterious, fascinating, beautiful. Thanks for the journey, Bedouin. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Bedouin (Dec 7, 2000)
- The journey's not yet over, Erika... travel with us. Be well
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| Reviewer:
alika |
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Nov 23, 2000 |
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A true Masterpiece (would like to see the rest of it) (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Bedouin (Dec 7, 2000)
- I know you alika, you are sweet and polite, even when you DO stick out your tongue! Be good and happy
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| Reviewer:
libertas |
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Nov 23, 2000 |
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Excellent story ! Could we have more ? :-) (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Bedouin (Dec 7, 2000)
- Merci, libertas.... x
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| Reviewer:
lenox |
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Nov 20, 2000 |
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Just plain facinating. I found the story to move deeper and deeper into darkness and then show light, very faint, but enough to keep a submissive in complete mental bondage. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
miel (Dec 10, 2000)
- A clever analysis :) Thank you a lot for your insight lenox.
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| Reviewer:
nin-nin |
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Nov 20, 2000 |
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love the style it`s written (10/10)
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- Replied by:
miel (Dec 10, 2000)
- Merci nin-nin, it is a lovely compliment :)
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| Reviewer:
sparks |
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Nov 19, 2000 |
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Excellent storie, first rate plot and development;waiting for the rest (10/10)
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- Replied by:
miel (Dec 10, 2000)
- As we all wait ... Let's hope that such a nice begging will be heard :)Thank you for having written this message sparks.
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| Reviewer:
button |
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Nov 14, 2000 |
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absolutely wonderful. It captured my heart, and everything else to boot. Please please write more. And if I could give it more than 10 I would. Thank you Bedouin for stiring my imagination. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
miel (Dec 10, 2000)
- Indeed button, i do agree. Thank you for your review :)
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| Reviewer:
azulita |
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Nov 11, 2000 |
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my advice is to read it with your dildo nearby... its HOT HOT HOTi am so grateful someone showed me the way to this story that plucks the heat from my heart and...... well, i hope he writes more stuff. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
miel (Dec 9, 2000)
- Tsk tsk tsk azulita ... you naughty, naughty, naughty bad girl !
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nin-nin (Dec 13, 2000)
- lol... azulita... I never had a dildo. Always prefered a real man !
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| Reviewer:
anuket |
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Nov 11, 2000 |
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wonderful read! more, more, please (10/10)
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miel (Dec 9, 2000)
- You are right anuket, it calls for more:)Thanks for the nice begging!
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| Reviewer:
tatytot |
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Nov 11, 2000 |
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very good story
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- Replied by:
miel (Dec 9, 2000)
- Glad you liked it:)
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| Reviewer:
Painfully_Yours |
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Nov 10, 2000 |
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Ok story but not enough variation in teh action. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
miel (Dec 9, 2000)
- Thank you for your insight Painfully Yours:)
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| Reviewer:
kristine |
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Nov 9, 2000 |
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Made me shiver alllllll over! More more more please! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
miel (Dec 9, 2000)
- Shiver? LOL kristine, i can relate!
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| Reviewer:
willowmyst |
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Nov 9, 2000 |
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An absolutely delightful read! i can barely wait to read more about miel's excitingly
erotic adventures! The Author definitely understands "The Life" of BDSM. Thank you for
sharing Your wonderful fantasy, Bedouin, Sir. :) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
miel (Dec 9, 2000)
- Indeed willowmyst, Bedouin understands well the spirit of BDSM. It shows well in His writing, doesn't it? And just like you, i can't wait for reading more, but then, i heard that 'patience' was not my middle name :)
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| Reviewer:
FZ |
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Nov 8, 2000 |
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wonderful.... Very good story, one of the best you can found on the web. :-) (10/10)
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- Replied by:
miel (Dec 9, 2000)
- Thank you for this kind comment FZ.
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| Reviewer:
vixen |
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Nov 8, 2000 |
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Absolutely stunning ! more please ! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
miel (Dec 9, 2000)
- Thanks for having taken the time to review the tale vixen, and like you, i wished there were more :)
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| Reviewer:
Suzi |
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Nov 8, 2000 |
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Excellent story, but we need even more than 15 chapters! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
miel (Dec 9, 2000)
- Ah yes ! i agree with you ! If only Bedouin could rescue this poor miel and add another chapter ! i keep beggin Him ... but you know how Doms are !
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| Reviewer:
Bad Girl |
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Nov 7, 2000 |
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I love great stories like this that have plots and keep keep me so wet as I read. I Hope there's more to this story soon. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
miel (Dec 9, 2000)
- Thanks for your comment, i am glad you enjoyed it.
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