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Cannibal 4H
Author: Eurytion
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(Added on Dec 30, 2002)
(This month 159530 readers) (Total 203255 readers) |
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Cannibal 4H or C4H as it has come to be known on the newsgroups chronicles the adventures of two young people, Joey Geryon and his girlfriend Linda Sue and their adventures in raising human cattle. It contains violence, death, family tragedy, sex of all shades and stripes and people eating people. This tale is not to everyone's taste. If you have the slightest idea that you might be offended by the contents of this story, please read no further. As the Judge would say "caveat lector:" let the reader beware. |
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| Reviewer:
kicksnf
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Jun 14, 2011 |
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SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! (1/10)
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xandra_miel
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Jul 11, 2008 |
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Writting skills over average, but I didn't found the story interesting. Not into human cattle. (6/10)
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IDCrewDawg
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May 26, 2006 |
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This story was very well written. The author was able to describe very intricate elements and tie together the different charaters and plot lines that were throughout the story. Although it was long, it was very enjoyable. I look forward to either more chapters or more stories from this author. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 11, 2004 |
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good but not into cannibalism even as a fantasy (8/10)
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agp_millie
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Jul 15, 2003 |
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Eurytion is my Hero. Such vivid imagination and realism.
i have read every chapter and can't wait for Chp.22.
Just brilliant, but a shame not more Dairy cows being developed for the World Milk shortage. (smile) (10/10)
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seumas
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Apr 27, 2003 |
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As twisted as Matthew Stokoe's _Cows_, but one helluva lot sexier. As sexy as JG Ballard's _Crash_, but without the gut-twisting realism. Cracking good read that I'd hesitate to recommend to anyone who's not at least as warped as I am. You keep writin' em, I'll keep readin' 'em.
cvx9n (10/10)
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Firepager
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Jan 8, 2003 |
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now only if there was more (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Eurytion
(Edit) (Jan 12, 2003)
- Chapter 21 will post at the end of the month!
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| Reviewer:
omechron
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What I have read so far is excelent. Most everything makes sense and you haven't left too many dangling plot points. Your language is descriptive and enjoyable to read.
I particularly enjoy the casual way they talk about how the human cattle are treated. And the bit about arguing over sauce and wood was pure genius. It added a great deal of realism.
2 problems...
1) the bouncing back and forth between the plane and the other stuff is kind of disorienting.
2) Why did you mention that he saw where the extra tags were stored? I thought for a moment he was gonna try to snag one for Vallerie. This is what I call a dangling plot point... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Eurytion
(Edit) (Jan 5, 2003)
- Omechron:
Thanks for the kind words.
Regarding the two points you made:
1. The trip to Japan is a large plot development in the story. After Neuralmancer gave me permission to continue C4H, I had in mind about four or five more chapters.
As I typed, the story took on a life of its own and there are now some 40 chapters plotted out.
Some of these chapters are directly concerned with Joey and Linda Sue, others such as Chapter Nineteen: A Marriage Ends, are beind used to expand and add depth to the C4H Universe.
There hasn't been any mention of the plane since Chapter Four because, as you pointed out, it was awkward and got in the way of the development of the story.
2. You are right that Joey's glimpse of "something white and shiny" in Al Crenshaw's desk drawer in chapter four is a dangling lpot point. But it;s dangling because of an editing error on my part.
In converting C4H from Word to text and combining the chapters, several small portions of the story were left out. One was In Chapter Ten. It had Linda Sue telling Valerie
"You wer sleeping so soundly, you didn't even twitch when I lifted this off from around your neck. But I'm an honest person. I just wanted to borrow this badge for a litle while. I HAD AL KEEP IT IN HIS DESK DRAWER FOR ME. I'm done with it now. You can have it back."
It's been three eyars since I posted new chapters of C4H, a lot of things have keep me away from the story, but I will be posting new chapters this spring.
Again thanks for your perceptive comments.
Eurytion
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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Jan 1, 2003 |
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This story is well written, but it was started, I believe by Neuromancer, and then continued by Eurition. For anyone into gynophagia it is a great read. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Eurytion
(Edit) (Jan 5, 2003)
- kaleun76:
You are correct. Neuralmancer was the original author of C4H and wrote the first two chapters. C4H isn't the only stroy of this type he has written. They are all very enjoyable and I suggest you search them out.
I continued to write C4H only after Neuralmancer gave me his permission. And each individual chapter I've posted has acknowldged his role as the originalauthor of the first two chapters and my thanks for his kindly allowing me to continue the story.
The plain fact is that, without Neuralmancer's original work, there would be no C4H today.
I hope I have done a good job in adding to C4H while taking it in somewhat different directions.
Eurytion
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