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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Fayra Lee
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Dec 11, 2003 |
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This is one of the best stories I ever read in the net. I loved it. I read it twice and Iīll read it againg. Itīs so damm sexy.
I think the most hot part is when the nurses keep asking him is he wants the panties. I loved that. Itīs great.
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
RopeBinder
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Sep 24, 2003 |
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This well written story is a great addition to anyone's teasing and denial library. While I found much of the dialogue and storyline improbable, if you close your eyes and fantasize, it seems possible enough. Kudos to Andrew Devine for writing one of the better teasing and denial stories on the Internet. Thank you! (9/10)
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slavetobenamed
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Apr 3, 2003 |
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Excellent story I would love to read more about it. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
S_Couture
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Feb 27, 2003 |
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An excellent story. I can't wait to see what happens next. (9/10)
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Drax
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Jan 16, 2003 |
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Excellent story you may continue. What kept you from getting a 10, is your incessent whining about whether you should continue. Also, you did not have to let out the secret regarding the soft drink. An inteligent reader already knew it. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
merlin
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Jan 16, 2003 |
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Great story with great characters, and I hope do you wish to continue... (10/10)
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forlornhope
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Jan 13, 2003 |
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Well written and very sexy! (9/10)
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Lady Lance
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Jan 11, 2003 |
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The story is well written, and I would recommend it on that alone, however I'm finding the story starting to repeat upon itself (Carol leaves. Nurses tease him. He drinks the soft drink. Carol returns. He comes) . I think it's time for them to leave the hopsital and start getting into other practices. Variety, after all, is the spice of life :) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
vaibhavagg
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Jan 7, 2003 |
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yeah thats the nice attempt. It should a bit fast.
more humiliating bondage positions and use of different chastity devices can prove it to be a real charm. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
tsukasa
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Jan 6, 2003 |
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This was great, keep going with the story. I can't wait to read what happens next. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Schiff
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Jan 4, 2003 |
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I love the story and hope you post the next chapters soon!! I like mix of helplessness and humiliation.. (9/10)
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rcabo
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Jan 4, 2003 |
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Off to an interesting start. Parts 2-3 are excellent, looking forward to the continuing developments! (10/10)
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wimp46
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Jan 1, 2003 |
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I enjoyed your first chapter. I look forward to see where this goes. Thanks (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Richl
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Dec 31, 2002 |
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Really enjoyed this. Looking forward to seeing the next step! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
alphie712fr
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Dec 30, 2002 |
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Very good start.Just a bit of humiliation so far but the characters will surely develop in the next chapters.Please keep it coming.Thanks. (9/10)
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sardonicus
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Dec 30, 2002 |
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Excellent beginning. I can imagine many possibilities when thinking of directions this could go. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
object7
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Dec 30, 2002 |
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A great start! how about having the nurses dominate him too! well worth continuing with. (8/10)
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