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Tit For Tack
Author: Nighthawk Blue
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(Added on Jan 7, 2003)
(This month 15163 readers) (Total 39721 readers) |
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James is a man is an knowledged sexual addiction to the love and abuse of the female body. But in order to live out his darker fantasies he recurites willing males and females to perform for him. He uses his wealth, striking good looks to assist him in satifying his growing needs to to punish and torture beautiful and young willing females. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 24, 2005 |
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i the story was ok, but ihave a isuewith stories that are both consensual and reluctant, most stories can't go both way, (7/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Oct 20, 2003 |
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The author needs to understand the difference betweeen action and plot (this story has a lot of action but little plot). Also describing what a character is doing does not flesh out their character or set the mood. The writing is grammatically ok but fails to convey mood or color. The total effect is flat.
You have the basics down now go for the meat! (6/10)
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