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Evolution/Revolution
Author: J D Wilson
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(Added on Jan 14, 2003)
(This month 33215 readers) (Total 50076 readers) |
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A woman leads her fiance and later her niece into world of BDSM and slavery. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 20, 2005 |
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needs work but it looks like there is a storythere, keep it up will adjust my review as it goes on (5/10)
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le forgeron
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Aug 28, 2003 |
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The form is there, but there is no real content, and no development. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
MistressCandi
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Jan 27, 2003 |
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Good writing but slow start, awaiting any BDSM content. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Jan 18, 2003 |
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No complaints about the general standard of writing, but the lack of any B, D, S or M (so far) was a disappointment for this reader. Wrong site I think. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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Jan 18, 2003 |
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The writing skills were there for sure, but the content really lacked the BDSM smut level that i look for. This story was rather tame and vanilla. Lots of blowjobs, titsucking and in/out repeat. I kept on reading waiting for the vanilla prelude to end and it never did. Still, it's well written. (5/10)
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