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Blair Becomes Owned
Author: blairbrek
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(Added on Nov 15, 2000)
(This month 33640 readers) (Total 88560 readers) |
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Married, Blair makes the mistake of being the only female at a party. She is put into a positon where that night comes back to haunt her and change her life. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
illk9
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Aug 26, 2012 |
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Great story! I hope to read more! (9/10)
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soldier132132
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Nov 25, 2008 |
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I didn't find the husbands reaction believable once he found out. And after Blair lost her job what was left to hold over her? Over all though it was an excellent story. (6/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 11, 2004 |
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a real sleeper, good story, good everything (8/10)
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Navin
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May 18, 2004 |
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One of the best humiliation stories.
Very well writen.
Excellent use of language.
Just perfect.
Keep up the good work. (10/10)
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jbowler65
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May 9, 2004 |
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Well written story that could have used a bit more character development to round things out. (8/10)
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cvilla
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Mar 2, 2004 |
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10 (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
woolfighter
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Aug 29, 2003 |
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I love all your stories, but this opne is, for me, the best. Pls. go on writing. (10/10)
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xxxreader44
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Feb 26, 2003 |
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Worth reading... But saying that, the story left some parts too 'unreal'. The husband could have taken a different reaction, perhaps fighting and getting beaten to a pulp. Now the wife has to 'put-out' to protect her husband from more physical beatings. Why she accepted all the men at the start was never very clear, other than she got horny and overpowered with passion. I think you've got to start with something more structured than that to get the ball rolling. Also a few more sections of her being abused by the other men, would satisfy my need for more sexual actions. Overall, I still maintain this story has lots of potential, and with only a little work could be a classic.. (7/10)
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trusser
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Feb 21, 2002 |
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Humilation is a wonderful thing but whose was worse Blair or Denis Reminded me of several other stories with similar theme If this is your cup of tea you should fin the stories of Taford Arain on ASSTR site. (9/10)
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ownedgirl
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Sep 26, 2001 |
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Although the writing style is way above average,(this author obviously has talent as witnessed by other titles) and the plotline is also above average, this reviewer was totally turned off by one aspect of the story. As everyone who reads, or writes these stories should know, this is all fantasy, as it should be.However ,to try to get the average reader to believe that any husband would react like that, and be such a total wimp goes beyond the possible realm of imagination or fantasy.. The weak character of Denis was just not realistic, and the shame of this is that this could have been a great story by making Denis realistic enough to act like a normal man and husband, rather than a spineless, ' ball-less ' jellyfish, and the reader could still have enjoyed all of the torments and humiliations of Blair in a believable setting... While this reviewer is venting, and this might be just personal choice, but to use the tactiic of " she came home hours later, in tears and covered in cum, and didn't want to talk about it" more than once is a turn-off, Once is fine maybe, to allow each individual reader a chance to exercise their own imaginations,but to do it multiplr times in the same story...A talented writer like this should be willing to type a few extra pages, and share the behind the scenes with everyone
(3/10)
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Scott |
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Mar 20, 2001 |
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Nice humiliation story. Wish there were more of this quality to review. Liked the suspense that came from the husbands perspective (with him not at all of her "events"). Although to rate it higher, his character needs more brains, balls or just justifaction for doing nothing. I mean, after a while just send her to Atlanta to work in a strip bar for 6 weeks to raise some cash! (8/10)
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acercher |
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Mar 10, 2001 |
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This author just has a great feel for describing humiliation. (8/10)
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Mora |
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Dec 29, 2000 |
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great story of a wife that realizes the price of being a flirt. hope there is going to be more (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
erin |
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Dec 24, 2000 |
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loved the whole premise of a married female becoming owned through her own foolishness (9/10)
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bob |
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Nov 21, 2000 |
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Loved the story of wife getting used and her husband having to hear and then watch as it happens again. Like the teasing, humiliation and blackmail. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Paul |
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Nov 19, 2000 |
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Nothing as bad as a story about a wimp of a man. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Painfully_Yours |
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Nov 15, 2000 |
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Now this one i liked. I only wish it had been longer and more detailed. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen 666 |
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Nov 15, 2000 |
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I almost fell asleep waiting for the action to begin. Then when things just started to get interesting it was the end. The author talked the talk incessantly but did not walk the walk. I would suggest that he continue with this tale and try to provide more action and less development. Slut sories can be very good if done properly. (4/10)
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