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Housework
Author: Finding_Fantasy
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(Added on Jan 21, 2003)
(This month 11417 readers) (Total 21419 readers) |
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A submissive spends the afternoon at home with her master, doing housework and chores as punishment. Her master feels that more excessive punishment may be required for this slut. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
THE Traveller
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May 9, 2005 |
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I liked the character restricted narrative. It made every addition to her punishment a sweet surprise. It also created an erotic crescendo.
Nice descriptions of her bondage. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Drax
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Jan 24, 2003 |
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The climax portion couldhave been better, more descriptive. But not bad. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Finding_Fantasy
(Edit) (Jan 25, 2003)
- Thanks for reviewing my story. :) I know it isn;t the best, but it was ne of my very early attempts and erotica is not my usual genre. It was written for my significant other. Again. Tahnks for reviewing!
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jan 24, 2003 |
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This is a very good story. I am glad to see paragraphs well defined, as well as good spelling and good grammar. The First Person writing is well executed. Too little sex in my opinion, but hey, you take what you can get. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Finding_Fantasy
(Edit) (Jan 25, 2003)
- Thanks for reviewing! I am glad that you liked it. It was one of my early attempts...actually it was written about 2 and a half years ago. My main genre isn't erotica, but I am glad that you enjoyed it. :) Thanks again!
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