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She Who Is His
Author: Subher
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(Added on Jan 28, 2003)
(This month 134065 readers) (Total 204261 readers) |
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She takes a job and gets more than she bargained for. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 26, 2004 |
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simply look at the other reviews (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 10, 2003 |
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It is obvious that a lot of effort went into writing this fairly long story, so why the author did not think to devote a little time to its punctuation and grammar is beyond me. In essence, it is a pretty good tale, but it is wrecked as an erotic piece by being so irritatingly poorly written. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
lord_odie
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Feb 16, 2003 |
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Great story. Horrible grammer. I had to backtrack several times to find out if someone was saying something, or the author was describing the situation. All in all, the story is worth the effort. I recomend this one. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
RTNYMaster
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Feb 2, 2003 |
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The storyline isn't bad but it was almost impossible to read because the writing is atrocious. Punctuation, grammar and sentence structure wouldn't pass muster in elementary school. (3/10)
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BDSM_Tourguide
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Jan 29, 2003 |
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This was a very nice story to read, but the dialogue was hard to pick out. Punctuation was not used very effectively, but the atmosphere and the descriptions were set well. (5/10)
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