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Wren 19
Author: SmCyber
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(Added on Nov 21, 2000)
(This month 27701 readers) (Total 72952 readers) |
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Military torture training camp. This is Part 19 of 25 total parts. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 5, 2009 |
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I'm beginning to understand folks who give low scores for spelling errors, more and more.
There's literally not one single sentence in this story that doesn't have a mistake, be it grammatical, spelling or syntax.
A couple of the tortures are enticing, so to speak, but overall this tale lacks in quality, both storytelling-wise as on the skill front.
JJ (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Kira
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Dec 29, 2003 |
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Realy hot and nice written story, I like the details it makes easy to follow the story. Where I can find the other parts 1-18 and 20-25, i need them, please post it. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 12, 2003 |
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Good story, totaly unrealistic, if more chapters come out, make it more believeable (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer |
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Apr 3, 2001 |
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Boring succession of unrealistic brutality. That the foreign names are misspelled fits into the picture. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
bebeball |
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Jan 14, 2001 |
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What an excellent plot, there is a lot of scope for this story to develop anyone agreee? (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rforester |
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Jan 1, 2001 |
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Hope the auther posts more parts !!! an interesting plot which turned me on !!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
peeps |
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Jan 1, 2001 |
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I agree the attention to detail is very erotic (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
CaptainBlue |
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Dec 31, 2000 |
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Lurved the humiliation angle wonderful images :-)))
CapB (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Bob |
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Dec 31, 2000 |
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Very Hot Story (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Spreader |
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Dec 5, 2000 |
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incredible attention to female anatomy. Wonderfully erotic with sinister quality that excites. (10/10)
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qwerty |
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Nov 22, 2000 |
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Really imaginativ, nice plot
heavy nc (10/10)
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