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The Compound
Author: Dr. Phil
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(Added on Nov 26, 2000)
(This month 34556 readers) (Total 58657 readers) |
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A wealthy woman hires the services of professionals for a very special revenge. |
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| Reviewer:
Sador
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Apr 3, 2011 |
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Most stories here deal with the diminishment of self in some way and in particular circumstance. The good Doctor takes this to a logical end with this story. Well written and creative, it is at least for me haunting in its ferocity. I think it suggests a sequel from the POV of one of the recipients of the unexpected tapes documenting her suffering. Maybe that person investigating the source of the tapes and the cause of her downfall? Would forgiveness from just one of her victims alter the landscape at all? *hint-hint* :) Thanks for the great read! (10/10)
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Marten49
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Mar 12, 2011 |
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I liked this story very well. The heroine is sacrificing herself of doing bad things to the world. When I compare this story to the Nola Story by Strap I think this one is better because of the shortness and the idea that the girl is delivering herself directly to liberating the society from herself. I liked the direct confrontation and the severe humilation of the heroine!!
Great !! (9/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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nicely done (7/10)
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BigCat
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Oct 13, 2005 |
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Inventive, tough tale. Ending telegraphed? To a degree, though I thought Renaud might be the one to turn the tables on Laura. Well done, as usual. (9/10)
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ladys_maid
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May 26, 2003 |
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This is certainly an inventive, well written and exciting story, but the outcome is rather obvious from early on and it does take quite a time to get there. In that respect, it is a little frustrating. The only question is whether Laura will give herself over or be double-crossed by Renault. The outcome (when it eventually comes) is neither a surprise nor especially interesting. Still, a good and descriptive story with much to commend it. (6/10)
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cricket |
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Feb 13, 2001 |
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The ending was predictable. I would have enjoyed more sex in the story. (7/10)
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L.M. |
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Nov 27, 2000 |
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Very nice story. I liked the twist in the story of the inmate and WANT to see future stories like this! (8/10)
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Bill |
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Nov 27, 2000 |
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The story started with great potential but very early on it was quite apparent who the inmate was to be. What a turn-off. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Painfully_Yours |
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Nov 26, 2000 |
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it was great, but left me wanting more... much more. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
hyphen 666 (Nov 27, 2000)
- Please see my review of this story which is part of the Nola series written by Curt Strap, a mysterious genius who disappeared from the scene about five years ago. I am sending an e-mail to Jinn unmasking this fraud.
- Replied by:
Dr. Phil (Nov 27, 2000)
- Actually, my story is the original. `Curt Strap' modified my story to fit his own taste and added a new section in the middle. It's apparent where he edited in his new section and then returned to the original. When I emailed him about his use of my story he apologized and promised to give me credit for the original. If you look at his story listing you'll see that he gives credit to "The Island" as "Based on a story by Dr. Phil."
- Replied by:
L. M. (Nov 27, 2000)
- If anyone knows where to find the Story "Curt Strap" or "The Island" by Dr. Phil please email me at lmarkham@columbus.rr.com.
Louis
- Replied by:
L.M. (Nov 28, 2000)
- OK I messed up the first reply. Here is the correct reply. If anyone knows where there are more stories similar to this or if there are any sequals please email me at lmarkham@columbus.rr.com with where i can loacte them. Since Deja screwed up its archive it is difficult to find older erotica.
Thanks and sorry for the confusion
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