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Brightness, Contrast and the Horizontal Hold Author: subtle
(Added on Mar 15, 2003) (This month 10347 readers) (Total 27820 readers)
When Dana's relationship with her Dom starts to turn cold, she starts to get the picture.

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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: Sally J (Edit) Rating: Mar 1, 2005
well written w/good chars & fun plot (8/10)

Reviewer: MrChance (Edit) Rating: Nov 10, 2004
Like I said cake, a bright new world. Thanks for showing me. (Some) elements aside (the ice, haven't tried that), still loved it. I wonder if there's a part2? ;-) I'm gonna stalk you hon. Really am. Love your mind. Now if you write one with all elements to my liking.. I'm pretty sure you easily will ring my bell! (9/10)

Reviewer: Patrice (Edit) Rating: Aug 8, 2004
good subject, interresting in the application of ice, whice is quite rare. (7/10)

Reviewer: bdsmbill (Edit) Rating: Feb 18, 2004
This is very well written. I would prefer it if you gave us more at once. I am a Dom, not a sub, and I don't handle denial well. (9/10)

Reviewer: Cleo671 (Edit) Rating: Dec 5, 2003

I want to know what happens next.. (!!!!!)
:) (9/10)

Reviewer: anguisette (Edit) Rating: Apr 1, 2003
oh my....this is easily the best written story i've encounted on the site. i'm amazingly impressed with the storyline, the details, the structure, the grammar....everything! even the couple of spelling errors i noticed were completely forgotten as i kept reading. my props to you, subtle!! (10/10)

Reviewer: Powerone (Edit) Rating: Mar 15, 2003
Excellent story. Love how she tried to please her Master and how he tried to push her limits to please him. I can't wait until the rest of the story. Just wish you didn't leave me so hard at the end with no relief in sight. (9/10)

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