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Georgetta: The Bet
Author: The Dolphin
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(Added on Dec 6, 2000)
(This month 109283 readers) (Total 271461 readers) |
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Georgetta lost the bet and was ready to pay the debt. Her lover planned a wild, yet romantic, weekend for her. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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mark hendy
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Aug 11, 2011 |
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Slow is the word (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
John Tagliaferro
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Nov 26, 2010 |
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This is another one of many here that could be a published story with the help of the right editor. The Dolphin sets everything up well in the opening section and provides vivid descriptions of the actions and thoughts of the characters.
The only constructive criticism I have is some passages are repetitive. Example, chap. 5 when the duffel bag is pulled from under the bed. (9/10)
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tusayan
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Nov 18, 2008 |
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Love the story, very hot. very well written. (9/10)
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levert
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Dec 4, 2007 |
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It keeps you on the edge of your seat; it is very realistic. (9/10)
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allyson9514
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Oct 20, 2007 |
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I loved this story. I'm really looking forward to "the next weekend" :P (10/10)
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Dolphin38
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Sep 25, 2007 |
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Just a quick note to say hello and to thank those of you who've been kind enough to write a review. I wish I was a published, profesional author, but no, just a want-to-be-someday author. I've got two more stories written about Georgetta - just need to polish them up and post them. Again, thanks for the reviews. Keep those cards and letters coming! (10/10)
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g3po2
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Aug 11, 2007 |
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This story works on the premise of "the ticking clock" concept, used by every good mystery writer. The sexual aspects are extremely believable. Every aspect of this story seems extremely plausible--no character jumped over a tall building in a single bound!
However, I must warn you that I suspect that the author of this story is, in fact, a professional writer, and subsequently is going to achieve scores far greater than any mere amateur. (10/10)
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ProbeHerrII
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Jul 19, 2007 |
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A great write, plot, character development and great sex between characters that obviously care for one another! Leaves one looking for more about characters that we can care about. Please don't skip the week before the next weekend! Please write more soon! (9/10)
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sugar tits
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May 26, 2007 |
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WOW!!! This is something my boyfriend wanted to try so I decided to learn more about it. I LIKE IT I LIKE IT I LIKE IT. Will you please write more? (10/10)
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Lee Boudine
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Dec 2, 2006 |
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An exceptional story by a mature author with understanding of the joys of bondage.
Sexual relations: even bondage, domination, or submission without love is incomplete.
This is a complete story in plot; well written in prose. (9/10)
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somewriter
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Mar 14, 2006 |
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Excellent story, does not succumb to the temptation to be over the top despite its length. I wish there were more from the author! (10/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 12, 2006 |
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very nucely done, no wordy review needed here (10/10)
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shirley
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Nov 19, 2005 |
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I just love your work. I really wish i could be Georgetta, it's so exciting. It's a wonderful and sexy story! Keep writing! (10/10)
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Cokera
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Dec 26, 2004 |
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I have to say that this is a MUST read!!! Again one I had to print out to take my time with. There is simply no doubt that this is a publishable work. I would think your skills would also go into other arenas of writing. I am looking forward to reading more of your work. (10/10)
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Darkstar2173
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Nov 3, 2004 |
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I loved it. Its one of the best stories that I've read. I hope to read more (10/10)
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littleslut
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Jun 3, 2004 |
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not realy my cup of tea but enjoyable none the less (8/10)
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SatinDevil
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May 9, 2004 |
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Very sexy & well-written. I loved the little bits of humour mixed in. I don't usually go for stories with more of a romantic setting, but this one got me hooked! Very creative & a great read! (9/10)
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Omdom
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Apr 1, 2004 |
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This is a great story from both technical and creative points of view. The Dolphin demonstrates skillful language skills and conscientious self editing. But I was more interested in his story itself. It is imaginative, realistic, and detailed. I especially liked Georgia\'s initial outfit with the boots. Then I got caught up in the teasing and could not stop reading. Sounds like the author has personal experience with his characters. Well done! Way to go! (10/10)
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dingo_dave
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Jul 13, 2003 |
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Could not stop reading. Very beleivable story that could actually be true. I like the way the position of the story teller changes at times to provide both points of view. (10/10)
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buttercup
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Jun 3, 2003 |
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Wonderful story! Believable and extremely sexy! I wanted to BE Georgetta! Thoroughly enjoyable. Please write more!!!! (10/10)
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don11
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Apr 14, 2003 |
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Excellent.
There is a joy in this that works well.
keep writing.
(10/10)
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Jacker
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Feb 16, 2002 |
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leaves you with a warm fuzzy feeling. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
DOM68005
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Oct 22, 2001 |
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Intersting from beginning to end. a few nice twists and surprises especially Saturday before 10 a.m.
Written in several Chapters. very few typos considering the length. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mr. Quiet |
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Jan 14, 2001 |
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Thoroughly enjoyed it. Liked the bondage ideas. The Authoor implies there will be a sequal & I hope there will be one quickly. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rick |
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Dec 13, 2000 |
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If you like teasing stories, you'll love this one.
(10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Paul |
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Dec 10, 2000 |
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A great story for the holidays! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Suzi |
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Dec 7, 2000 |
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This is a fun, sexy story! Made me wish I had a creative boyfriend like Chris! (9/10)
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