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A Good Team
Author: Woolfighter
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(Added on Mar 21, 2003)
(This month 70380 readers) (Total 132612 readers) |
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Patricia Johnson owns a company but slowly becomes owned herself by it. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
street0
(Edit) |
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Sep 19, 2007 |
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An excellent story of systematic humiliation.
I'd recommend shorter paragraphs and some spell-checking, though.:)
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dürrer
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Sep 30, 2004 |
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(5/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Sep 30, 2004)
- Zu Tode schreiben tust du dich wahrhaftig nicht.
Trotzdem Danke fürs Lesen.
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| Reviewer:
Wyn
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Feb 10, 2004 |
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Good premise. Good story. Awaiting further chapters. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 18, 2004 |
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i like the way it is written, with sole concentration of each female victim, hope there is more to come (9/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Jan 18, 2004)
- Thx. There is more to come. I've stuff in my head for at least 2 or 3 more chapters
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mkemse
(Edit) (Feb 16, 2004)
- i can understand not having good english, the fact that you acknowlefdge tihsm akes it so as i read more, i know you are aware of it, i would rather have "poor engflish" then not have the story in english at all, i do not read anything but english, so i applaud you for making a sheer effort to inprove yours
please email me when new chapters are posted
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Dec 6, 2003 |
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This story is extremely promising, but I cannot rate it highly due to the extreme numbers of mistakes. An editor and some proofreading is definately needed. On the plus side, the premise is very good. Hopefully the author can find an editor and make this a top notch story. (5/10)
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johnnytoobad
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Nov 22, 2003 |
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Excellent story. One of the best. I like the way each woman is humiliated and debased and then straight on to the next one. May you could have a reluctant husband who is forced to go along with it, but not happy about his wife being used. I like the idea of susan perhaps not being fully accepting, but still unable to resist.
Please keep writing.
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Jan 18, 2004)
- You'll get your reluctant husband in part 7 or 8.
Thx for the suggestion
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Nov 6, 2003 |
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An absolutely fabulous story. I know I am pushing it here with this rating since there is some weakness in the writing, but the delicious shifting of scene after scene of humiliation is breathless. Well done!! (10/10)
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woolfighter
(Edit) (Nov 6, 2003)
- Thx, really, thank you. I'm giving my best to improve my english and with reviews like yours, I'll double my efforts. And, as I see things, the important part is 'what' you tell, more then how you tell it.
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emman
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May 2, 2003 |
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Very good story,I hope that you will more about bossy, the humiliation of that women is so well imagined!! Keep up the good work! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Feb 12, 2004)
- Thx for your comments. By now I've a lot of work, but don't worry you'll hear about bossy.<br>C U
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emmaadmirer
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Apr 7, 2003 |
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WOW!
I hope there will be more about bossy and the poor wife (not trying to influence you) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Apr 8, 2003)
- Emmaadmirer!!! Wow!!! You are one of my favorits, thx for writing. Yes of course there will be more.
C U
Woolfighter
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| Reviewer:
dolll
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Apr 6, 2003 |
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Hey there,
This story made me hot! I'd give it a 9... but I think the writing could be tightened up a bit. That's the easy part... You have the majic in your mind! (7/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Apr 8, 2003)
- I hope the sequel achieves your 9.
C U
woolfighter
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| Reviewer:
rainee
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Mar 21, 2003 |
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A great start...would like to see more!! A great imagination at work... (8/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Apr 8, 2003)
- Always working at the updates, just wait and see.
C U
Woolfighter
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| Reviewer:
jasbrico
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Mar 21, 2003 |
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Love the humiliation theme. Peter's definitely my favorite character. Can't wait for the next installments!! Keep up the great work Woolfighter!! (8/10)
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YNHumiliator
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Mar 21, 2003 |
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Humiliation aspects are very good indeed. Great story so far. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
koalas
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Mar 21, 2003 |
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Very good, I love the way Patricia is humiliated. Hope there is more. (8/10)
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