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Enjoying the Sins of the Son
Author: Pagan
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(Added on Mar 30, 2003)
(This month 12232 readers) (Total 29921 readers) |
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It doesnĄ¯t pay to rip off your wealthy father, not for you or your pretty wife. |
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Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 13, 2004 |
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simply noy my type story (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
renko
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Apr 4, 2003 |
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poor spelling whether deliberate or not is off-putting.. and slow opening (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Mar 30, 2003 |
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I'm afraid I must agree with kemosabe. The writing was horrible. It seems the author knows the words he is trying to use, however he doesn't know how to spell them. Also, grammar was horrible. What I could understand of the story was very compelling, and I think it could be a very interesting story but for the errors. (2/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Mar 31, 2003)
- For what it's worth, all the things you point out have been said by many others over the time that the author has been posting. In my opinion the errors that you note are deliberate and follow a very disciplined pattern. I think that Pagan is gaming the reviewers for his own selfish reasons. My response to his efforts has been to stop reading his stuff.
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| Reviewer:
kemosabe
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Mar 30, 2003 |
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Sorry, but the author needs a better command of the English language. Very confusing and not too erotic at that. (3/10)
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