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Never Work Late
Author: Powerone
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(Added on Apr 17, 2003)
(This month 24661 readers) (Total 51507 readers) |
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He found her working late alone one night. Bound to a desk, he raped her in all of her holes and then punished her with a pussy whipping. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 21, 2004 |
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you very rarely disipoint with any story, this is no exception (9/10)
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Nitrofox
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Jun 25, 2003 |
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This is written reasonably well. I can't identify at all with the main female character, and her actions are inexplicable, at least to me. I also, I'm sorry to say, despise stories written in the second person. Good effort, but it just doesn't work for me. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Barbara Anne
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Apr 19, 2003 |
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OOOH! You sadistic bastard. However the storyline was consistant and the language reasonably well written. I wonder if you've ever explored the relationship between pain and pleasure, yourself, first hand as it were. I would be happy to assist you in that regard.
You could certainly benefit from the attentions of an experienced Mistress, to put your stories into proper perspective. After I've finished with you you'll be a far better informed writer. Call it applied research, if you will. Contact me at nzgsk@hotmail.com to arrange your first session? (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Nitrofox
(Edit) (Jun 25, 2003)
- Last I checked, these were not the "Help Wanted" listings. Kindly keep your reviews subjective, and by that I mean regarding to the story. If you'd like to advertise yourself, send an E-Mail.
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mine to give
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Apr 18, 2003 |
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i couldn't identify with the sub in this story. The actions were not described with enough of the feelings that she would have. (4/10)
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lord butterfly
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Apr 17, 2003 |
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Well written with immediate and continuing sexual activity. The descriptions of the sub's feelings provided good support for the bdsm. (8/10)
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