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The Cave
Author: Steve
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(Added on Dec 13, 2000)
(This month 42204 readers) (Total 99278 readers) |
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The girls were kidnapped to this cave and their only fate was to be tortured and killed. WARNING: extremely graphic torture and death. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Shibari
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Aug 27, 2008 |
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I'm sorry I started reading this and was glad when I stopped after the third paragraph. I suppose some people are into this sort of thing, on a strictly fantasy basis. I sincerely hope no one acts on any of this as it was very disturbing. It was violent and violence is not sex. Power is sensual, but killing/hurting people is not. That's just my opinion, but I think that very few people will view this as erotic, sensual or sexual. (1/10)
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laursie
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Feb 10, 2006 |
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I could not finish reading but I was warned so I cannot complain. It was very disturbing but to me reality is far more disturbing. People go for very different things and I guess some go for this. As long as it stays like this and goes no further there is a place for it. (5/10)
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cassy
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May 17, 2005 |
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to me the story was very brutal and belittling to women... (1/10)
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Damon13
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May 13, 2005 |
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hear all those self-righteous bastards!
come on guys! what are you reading those storries for? why are you here at all? mom sure didnt allow it!!!
and by the way, do you think wes craven is sick, or the guys who bring us "the ring", "visitor Q" and the like. Or think about Fellini, Greenaway - thats even supposed to be art - and could also be called fascist or chauvinist.
Okok Steve might not be a great artist, but please let him be.
I must admit, I found it hard to read, so I deleted it right away, just to come back half a year later to go throught the archive trying to find it, because it has sth to it, because it is so violent, so rough, so unusual... and thats the "Beauty" of it.
To all those offended girls... whats that about? I wouldnt be offended if he was writing the same about guys! Dont take things so personal!
By the way steve, what happened to all those promised sequels, short stories ect? Or did those comments scare you off from writing...
(8/10)
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Mothbrad
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Apr 22, 2005 |
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Great stuff - I've enjoyed reading all the self-righteous 'reviews' almost as much as the story. Gee, I'd hate to be a pervert and like dirty stories - wouldn't you? Anyway, this story brings back memories of the wild stories that were being written five to ten years ago in the earlier, less sophisticated days of the WWW. Worth a read if you can stand what it advertises. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 1, 2004 |
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why is it that when an author like yourself posts that it is exrememly violent ect. read at your own risk people get pissed of at you because of the content
Like you said, you warned them, let them live with it if they read it (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
gojack10
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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I think too many nipples are sliced off without any character development done. Can't we just have these nipples pierced or lightly kissed anyway? Author is not so much 'sick' as just boring and tense. (5/10)
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Equalizer
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Apr 26, 2003 |
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Commendable in its single-minded erotic brutality.
Sensitive and subtle it ain't! (7/10)
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baerchen24
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Apr 18, 2003 |
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Very nice. Dark and violent... (8/10)
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WMassa
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Jan 7, 2003 |
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Ok, some wishes left in terms of plot and writing. But what a bunch of brutal details. And what a gallery of cheating disclaimer-ignorers - should I say ignorants? Steve did announce, what he was to do - no reason to worry. Thank you, Steve, for an outstanding story, and if it stands all allone its special way... (8/10)
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bigone
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Apr 26, 2002 |
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Great general idea, many delightful details. Could be a bit better written, and could do a better job of what is going through these babes' minds as they encounter the sweet horrors that Steve invents for them. (9/10)
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mikeg2
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Sep 29, 2001 |
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disgusting (2/10)
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tattoo pat |
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Feb 6, 2001 |
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good imagination. may be too short in some descriptions and not very well write IMO but treating the subject, controversial!, is courageous. Despite the bad reactions of certains, I decided to put a good rating. Some fantasies can be the removal of limbs as fart it is only fantasy! freedom! Hum, the story seems unfinished? (8/10)
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ABrunetteWoman |
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Jan 15, 2001 |
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Having an imagination is one thing; having an imagination that produces these sort of sick thoughts is another. Hitler had an imagination too, I'm sure the author would have had a great time in one of the concentration camps.
The problem that the author doesn't seem to be able to grasp, is that he finds this sort of sick
material arousing or appealing in some way.
What is arousing about men cutting off women's nipples and eating them?
What is appealing about the choot thing?
What is arousing about pulling a woman apart limb
by limb? Etc Etc....
There are no saving features to this story. It is
gross in content, poorly written, with a totally ridiculous plot.
Give it up Steve. You have no talent for writing,
and a lot of psychological problems to sort out.
(1/10)
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- Replied by:
Steve (Jan 15, 2001)
- All I can say is there must be something within you that brought you to read this story. The disclaimer says "extreme torture and death". If you dont like it.....dont read it.
I may have an extreme imagination ...in fact I know I do but that is also where it stays ....in the imagination. I suppose it is the same fascination that makes most of us gravitate towards the more shocking stories on the news.
I note that most negative comment on the story comes from a female perspective which is understandable I suppose.
As far as telling what is or isnt arousing to various people...look around you ...we humans come in all shapes and sizes, colors and creeds. Each one of us are different and each are aroused by a different set of parameters
One mans(or womans) meat is anothers poison.
Simply ask yourself why you read the story....even if you didnt like this one ...to simply be in the area where you COULD read it suggests that this type of story appeals to you ....albeit not as severe
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| Reviewer:
Simon |
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Jan 13, 2001 |
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Very well written and conjured up some real images in my mind...I would like to see this story finished there seems to be some chapters missing (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Steve (Jan 13, 2001)
- Thanks for your vote and support....I need more like you
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| Reviewer:
Chantell |
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Jan 11, 2001 |
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I am woman, hear me roar: "Steve, you are one sick bastard!" (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Steve (Jan 13, 2001)
- Sick? maybe Chantell...theres a lot of it about I'd rather call it imagination
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| Reviewer:
Elizabeth |
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Jan 4, 2001 |
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The author is sick, of course - and the story is annoyingly written - and I don't like female torture at all... And yet - extreme things somehow appeal to me, no matter in what genre. (3/10)
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Steve (Jan 13, 2001)
- Sick of course?...how do you know...you dont know me...I have seen many mainstream horror films and never think the Author is sick just that he/she has imagination...The disclaimer said "EXTREME TORTURE AND DEATH" ...maybe you shouldnt have read it
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| Reviewer:
arena |
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Jan 4, 2001 |
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This is sick ! (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Steve (Jan 13, 2001)
- Sorry You saw it that way....
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| Reviewer:
John |
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Dec 19, 2000 |
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This author obviously has contempt for women. I, on the other hand, love women. This should never have been posted, there is absolutely NO BDSM here, only garbage. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Steve (Jan 13, 2001)
- Actually I LOVE women too and am happily married to a fantastic one and have a normal healthy sexual relationship. as above the disclaimer says "EXTREME TORTURE AND DEATH"
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| Reviewer:
Bobby O. |
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Dec 17, 2000 |
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My vote: stop writing, Steve. And maybe see a shrink about your hatred for women. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Steve (Jan 13, 2001)
- See reply to Elizabeth (above)
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| Reviewer:
Suzi |
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Dec 17, 2000 |
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Totally disgusting! (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Steve (Jan 13, 2001)
- Maybe....But that wasnt the question....did you ENJOY IT???
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| Reviewer:
Engineer |
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Dec 17, 2000 |
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Unrealistic and disgusting! Women deserve better than being thought of as slaughtermeat. I stopped with reading after a short leafing through. There's a difference between bdsm and contempt for humans. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Steve (Jan 13, 2001)
- I wouldnt say it was unrealistic...Disgusting ...thats a maybe.
'Tis your right to stop reading
The story was not billed as BDSM although it does have elements
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| Reviewer:
Painfully_Yours |
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Dec 16, 2000 |
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gross, too much for me (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Steve (Jan 13, 2001)
- Sorry 'bout that
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| Reviewer:
richard samuals |
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Dec 15, 2000 |
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Reminds me of the porn of the 70s - the paperbacks of Dr Bizarro. The story is implausable and the writing is great but if you are into brutality and grossness this gets a B+ -- and I do anxiously await the next chapter. The chute idea sucks. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Steve (Jan 13, 2001)
- Thanks for your kind words there are other chapters coming shortly along with some "short stories"
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| Reviewer:
hyphen 666 |
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Dec 15, 2000 |
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I guess this is what free speech is all about. I found this story to be crude and brutal, totally lacking in credibility and sophistication. It's comforting to know that there are sicker people than me out there.I will not read any additional chapters of this story. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Steve (Jan 13, 2001)
- "Crude and Brutal" is what it was SUPPOSED to be ....my imagination may be sickers than yours ...but give it time....
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