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Driving Lessons
Author: Mellanie Hewlitt
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(Added on Apr 29, 2003)
(This month 11563 readers) (Total 29558 readers) |
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Beautiful student is at mercy of perverted driving instructor and his nephew. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 22, 2009 |
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Not a bad read, but the story is littered with silly and not so silly spelling mistakes, and it takes half the story to get to its initial point, namely the debasement of Rachel.
Okay-ish entry, but lots of room for improvement here.
JJ (6/10)
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teamster
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Apr 11, 2004 |
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An amusing little tale, although not quite so interesting as the one with the monsters. Once again the writing style is quite competant, but you do misuse a few words {in turnship for internship, for instance.} Maybe you could get someone to proofread for you. Spell checkers will weed out a lot of errors, but not ones of this type. Not that it stopped me from enjoying your work. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Sep 26, 2003 |
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Yes, and hopefully more to come (10/10)
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deepbluemm
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May 6, 2003 |
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Dear Mellanie
I connect with your story totally. The proud and determined woman that you write of, willing to endure endless depravations to achieve her goal. Honey you have given us a priceless treasure. Few could write a story with such feeling and intimate details. Again thank you for writing this. Happy to correspond.
Mike (10/10)
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