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No Mercy
Author: Anne Gray
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(Added on May 12, 2003)
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Her plea of mercy made her mistress angry. This time, there was no mercy. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 5, 2010 |
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This is fiction and it is surely the fear that your Dom/Domme will not honour your safe words that makes being a slave so exciting. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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when you are good, you are good (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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Okay, so this more of an account than a story. To me, that's beside the point.
I thought that the point was to write something comprehensible, that is at the same time well-written and erotic.
Since this purpose has been achieved here, the exploit qualifies and has my blessing (as if that's needed).
Great description/story/session/whatever.
JJ (9/10)
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yamesh
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Feb 3, 2006 |
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Silly reviews! The disregarding of the safe-word is taboo and looses any eroticism? Glad I now know this so I can self sensor my own stories. Excellent job as usual Anne, my only complaint was that it was too short. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Anne Gray
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May 25, 2003 |
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I didn't think it was needed but obviously it is - my usual disclaimer: This is a work of Fiction. The author in no way condones or promotes any activity that is not ENTIRELY consensual! The only way I can add this comment is to add a rating so I went for an 8 LOL. Anne (8/10)
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- Replied by:
ladys_maid
(Edit) (May 25, 2003)
- Hi Anne! I don't think any of the reviewers actually think you condone or promote nc activities, it's just that most of us - at least in part - judge stories by their erotic appeal. In this story, that appeal was diminished by the nc aspect (at least for the reviewers to date). I guess it's the usual thing of not being able to please all the people all the time! It's all down to personal preferences at the end of the day.
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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May 21, 2003 |
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The writing was OK and "correct", for which we are all thankful, but the premise -- as the other reviewers have stated -- put me off. If you're not inclined to honor your sub's safe words (which you have given your word to do) for whatever reason, it's time to find a new sub or something else to do. The story could also use some dialogue or other form of interpersonal communication; putting a gag on prematurely can limits the possibilities on that score. The story lacks "life" even though the scene so capably described has the potential of being nicely erotic. The bra, for instance, was a nice touch. (6/10)
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Curtis
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May 17, 2003 |
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Okay, this story was well-written and hot. On the other hand, I fail to see how it can qualify as "light". Also, ladys_maid has a point. The narrator makes an effort to justify the failure to honor her bottom's safe signals and, at first, I accepted her justification. By the end, the real situation became a matter for conjecture and I began to believe that the narrator was a psycho, which MAY have been the author's intent (ie. artful ambiguity). I like Anne Gray's stories and wish she would post more often but, in spite of this sexy contribution, I couldn't rate it as highly as it may have deserved. (7/10)
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ladys_maid
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May 12, 2003 |
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This piece is a description of a bdsm session rather than a story but it is well written nonetheless. I had mixed feelings about the content of the story in that I suffer from a double standard. It allows me to very happily read tales of extreme cruelty and even snuff without complaint. However, bring into a story the situation where a domme willfully ignores a safe word from her sub and that sends a shiver down my spine. That made me uncomfortable and certainly killed off any eroticism. Maybe that's just me! (5/10)
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