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Rachel
Author: Bluebuck
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(Added on May 25, 2003)
(This month 68790 readers) (Total 102520 readers) |
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Young man discovers he has a step mother who expects him to discipline her daughter. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 21, 2005 |
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Just wish with the enemas that this was a non-consent story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jun 1, 2003 |
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The writing, especially the dialogue, is a little stilted, but the story (aside from being rather enema-heavy, but that was mentioned in the the story codes), was adequate and mildly hot. I suspect things did not quite end the way Harold thought he had arranged them. Probably his father and step-mother went back to their previous arrangement as soon as Harold was out of the house, but I liked the daughter and, sometimes, the step-mother. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
redEva
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May 27, 2003 |
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As I have trouble agreeing with the codes provided for reviewing the stories, I given this story only 7 even thought I believe it deserves higher rating.
It is excellent, erotic story, nicely told and easy to read. I personally prefer shorter stories to those that drag on, and on to no end without any real context to it.
Definitely worth reading
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Equalizer
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May 27, 2003 |
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Nicely written and erotic. (8/10)
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ladys_maid
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May 25, 2003 |
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The subject matter is pretty exciting but the storyline is equally pretty far-fetched. This is a short story, so characterization is not a particular feature of this mildly entertaining story. I thought it was just OK. (4/10)
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