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The Vulvoid Transform
Author: Lisa James
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(Added on Jun 6, 2003)
(This month 45087 readers) (Total 67514 readers) |
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Genetech's monstrous experiment has succedded in producing living panties that enslave their male host by turning them into unwilling girls. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Lord Douche
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Mar 11, 2004 |
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The first chapters were good, as it was original. The latest few chapters are okay, and the introduction of the Russians seems an attempt to break the monotony of "guys get caught, guys get enslaved into girls, rinse and repeat".
Personally, I think the author needs to add some sort of positive element; perhaps a female gets captured and the panties go wierd, or some sort of mutation occurs. The whole enslavement thing seems too hopeless at the moment.
LD (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Mar 9, 2004 |
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Very original and interesting story. Great work! (8/10)
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thatverybadgirl
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Jan 26, 2004 |
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that was a fun story. i didn't find it a turn on but i enjoyed reading it all the same. i could have done without the excessive exclamation points, though. ;) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
kittenfemme
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Jun 26, 2003 |
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A cute pair of panties that lives off orgasmic wetness? They throb and rub against the wearer? They make you masturbate for them at least twice a day? *blink* Um... so... where do I sign up for a pair? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
smiley010
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Jun 10, 2003 |
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A very good start. Keep up the good work (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Jun 9, 2003 |
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Spelling and grammar are OK. The content is not only silly but so weak it could be condensed into one paragraph. Not very much erotic appeal. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
williampeter
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Jun 9, 2003 |
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This was a graeat story and I enjoyed reading it the theme was new and imaganitive. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jun 7, 2003 |
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Lisa James...I should know that name... Aside from the quality of writing (which is very good), I have problems with nearly all of this story, and it seemed to be finished, so I don't quite understand why it's to be continued, but I'll not be reading the rest. Honest story codes and author's summary, though, and good spelling and grammar. (6/10)
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Equalizer
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Jun 6, 2003 |
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Phew! That was something different. The writing has a refreshing energy to it. Well done Lisa.
(9/10)
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