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A World for the Taking
Author: Couture
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(Added on Jun 24, 2003)
(This month 13623 readers) (Total 22976 readers) |
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Taking things was a part of Lisa's life she hoped to one day escape. But then. . . |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Excellent fait-divers between mother and daughter, who are rivalling between one another in 'taking' some unsuspecting victims. The scene in the store with 'Dee-Dee' is simply stunning --both description- as dialogue-wise-- and burns holes in underwear all around the planet.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 19, 2004 |
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i wanted to read and review it but the story was not shown, got a message that said story text is missing (5/10)
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- Replied by:
S_Couture
(Edit) (Feb 19, 2004)
- Sorry, but I have had an offer to publish my stories. As a result I've had to pull most of them from 'free' sites per the publisher.
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| Reviewer:
Parker
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Oct 18, 2003 |
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Another very good story. I agree that a continuation is uncalled for UNLESS you wish to take the story somewhere different. IMO, it's always best to leave the readers some fodder for their imagination. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladydragon
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Jun 29, 2003 |
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Delicious commentary on our consumer culture- I was very Taken with it. (Forgive me... *wink*)
I hope there will be more! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jun 29, 2003 |
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Okay, if I read the words 'Take', 'Taking', or 'Taken' again tonight I'm gonna go postal, but it's a good story, regardless, with enough sex and plenty of domination. I don't think it needs a sequel, but writing one successfully would demonstrate an even higher level of competance than the original. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
don11
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Jun 26, 2003 |
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Super idea.
Good haracterisation.
The right length.
Well done. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
S_Couture
(Edit) (Jun 28, 2003)
- Thank you!
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jun 26, 2003 |
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I liked it a lot. You could have a lot of fun with this idea. I hope you choose to write more tales about our "heroine." (9/10)
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- Replied by:
S_Couture
(Edit) (Jun 28, 2003)
- We'll see. There's been a lot of requests for that, but I kind of like the ending. It settles things, but leaves the reader plenty to imagine.
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| Reviewer:
kittenfemme
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Jun 26, 2003 |
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Fabulous! What an interesting idea... Taking. *purrr* (8/10)
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- Replied by:
S_Couture
(Edit) (Jun 28, 2003)
- I'd like to 'Take' you.
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