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An Apology
Author: kittenfemme
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(Added on Jul 12, 2003)
(This month 15000 readers) (Total 39688 readers) |
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Submissive little sara is punished for inadvertently insulting her Mistress with an offhand remark. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 6, 2010 |
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Neat little story, succulently showing the interaction between an eager submissive and her tough -but fair- mistress.
A thing often dearly missed in most sub/domme stories is the caring people have for one another, in whatever relationship they're involved.
Kittenfemme shows that care through minute details; a musing here, a fluttering eyelid or the raise of a heartbeat there.
It's these little things which make "An Apology" stand out.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
BruceCC
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Oct 4, 2004 |
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Steamy. kittenfemme has mastered the art of the intense buildup. Eagerly awaiting additional chapters. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
kittenfemme
(Edit) (Oct 4, 2004)
- Thank you BruceCC! I'm very glad you enjoyed the story. I've been thinking of continuing this sometime in the near future. Provided my muse cooperates, you might not have long to wait.
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| Reviewer:
Zen
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Nov 22, 2003 |
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This is very good kitten. I see you doing everything you write in my mind like you were here. It is beautiful. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
le forgeron
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Aug 13, 2003 |
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The first chapter is good, I'm expecting the next ones already! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Fox
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Jul 15, 2003 |
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I enjoyed the psychological torment depicted here. D/s is much more than ropes and whips, as kittenfemme has ably demonstrated. I find myself wanting to read more. There are some rough edges to the writing, however, which detract slightly from the story. Overall, a good read with the potential to be an excellent read. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jul 12, 2003 |
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This (psychological, heavily formalized) story is not my type at all, but the quality of the writingoverwhelms the subject matter '10' for style, '6' for content). Besides, anyone who can correctly use the word 'remanded' in a porn novel deserves at least an '8'. (8/10)
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