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The Mall
Author: Ellie
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(Added on Jan 13, 2001)
(This month 59675 readers) (Total 95455 readers) |
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A business man away from home goes lingerie shopping and gets more than bargained for. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
monica_snatch
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Mar 11, 2009 |
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This story is simply wonderful! I'm not sure whether it is the writer's intention to have their audience crying with laughter, but that is the effect it had on me.
Very ingenious plot, believeable characters and a lot of good natured kinky hijinks! (9/10)
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charlestudor
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Nov 11, 2006 |
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This story has played into my most erotic fantasies. I can't tell you how many wonderful orgasms I had reading it. Easily the best story I ever read. Can't wait for Ellie to post more along this line. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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Great story -- moving quite well from ever building humiliation to some great and inventive action. I loved the buildup, the public shaming, the situations and the ever-increasing payback. Occasionaly typos are easily skipped over. Now, onto the sequel! (9/10)
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slavetobenamed
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Apr 2, 2003 |
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Awesome story cannot wait to read the sequal. (10/10)
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latexj
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Feb 19, 2002 |
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This is the best series I have ever read. I can honestly picture myself in his position. I am anxiously awaiting the other chapters. (10/10)
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italianforce |
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Mar 14, 2001 |
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This story was great, but it leaves me wanting more. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Ellie (Mar 17, 2001)
- Parts II and III are on the board now. Others to follow very soon. Let me know what you think.
Regards,
Ellie
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| Reviewer:
Danielle |
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Feb 12, 2001 |
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This is exactly my fantasy. I can hardly wait for the next installment. Besides, the writing style and editing was far better than average. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Ellie (Feb 14, 2001)
- Glad you liked it. It's been a fantacy of mine for a long time. I've actually done some of it in RL. The rest of the story is written in rough and I'm cleaning it up and ading to it. I lost my computer for a while but now it's back and I'll get to work right away. I can try and incorporate a personal wish (dare) of your's if you'd like. Drop me a line if interested. Part II in a day or two.
Regards,
Ellie the slut
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| Reviewer:
mike |
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Jan 17, 2001 |
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good technical writing skills, medicore development & story line, indifferent content. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jude Mason |
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Jan 17, 2001 |
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The pace was perfect and I found very few grammatical errors at all. I'm looking forward to seeing where the fellow ends up (9/10)
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