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Janet's Extreme Slave Training
Author: Master Mick
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(Added on Aug 7, 2003)
(This month 194011 readers) (Total 236291 readers) |
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Master Mick has met three dominating women, who love to be cruel to other women. He agrees with Mistress Christy that she can make a maximum endurance test on Janet just pushing her further than she has ever been. Mistress Christy has promised Master Mick that she will make Janet exceed limits she never has exceeded before with help of her two friends Cyndi and Pat. Janet is a bit scared as she doesn't know these women and because they didn't mention a single word concerning safety. When it all begin Janet realises that Mistress Christy really knows how to make it painful for a woman using whips, paddles, cunt and nipple clamps, rubber breathing bag, hoods, gags and much more. The story is a role-play written together with a cyber friend named Janet. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 16, 2010 |
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I found the story to be rushed and lacking in depth. I mean, we're only two paragraphs into the story and are already confronted with a master who can't do anything else but bark orders at his sub. That's not a 'Master', it's an ignorant tit. A real master doesn't bark, but speaks in a well-mannered fashion.
Okay, so it's Master Mick's story, so who am i to say what is or shouldn't be.
Also, I've never been one to get all nervous about errors and stuff, but at the same time find it but a poor excuse when someone hides behind a foreign nationality to explain poor grammar.
The reason I don't write in Danish is because I'm no good at it.
Luckily, Mick has a more than adequate grasp of Shakespeare's language.
Decent story, decently written. But nothing to get your panties in a tangle over.
JJ (7/10)
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Grako
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Mar 23, 2005 |
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Wow this blew my mind. A very good and well thought out story - my life will not be the same after reading this. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
mickni2000
(Edit) (Apr 16, 2005)
- Hi Grako, thanks a lot for your nice review and your ten vote!!!!!!!!!! I have not been looking for reviews for this story for a while. That’s the reason for my late response. I’m sure Janet is happy as well as she had to ‘go’ through all the hard treatment….smile. I’m happy you like it. I just hope your wife will be able to cope with your new ideas….smile. Just promise me to be careful and make sure you take care of safety. I always love to read when my stories are able to give new ideas for the real life in a Master/slave relation or a Mistress/slave relation. I just want you all to be aware that a lot of the treatment in my stories exceeds limits that normally can’t be crossed in the real life without doing permanent damage to the slave. But I’m sure you are aware of this and take care of safety. If you like my stories it might be an idea reading my new story I have started up. You can read it using the link http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/story.php?storyid=3305.
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mkemse
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Nov 17, 2003 |
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has everything a good story of this nature should (9/10)
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- Replied by:
mickni2000
(Edit) (Nov 19, 2003)
- Thanks a lot!! Though this role-play is completed it is still very nice to receive review especially a review like this one!! This role-play was the first large role-play Janet and I have done together. I really was exciting writing it and we had a lot of fun during the process. If you read the introduction for the next part of Janet’s Ordeal you will discover that I have some seriously troubles to continue these role-plays. Janet won't be able to write more stories due to some personal problems. Therefore I try to find one or even more women ready to join me in these role-plays. It's not fun writing them alone.I hope I will succeed finding one or more women interested though I of course would like to continue writing them with Janet.
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Aug 10, 2003 |
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Nicely constructed and very creative. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
mickni2000
(Edit) (Aug 10, 2003)
- Thanks Emily, a nice, short review just telling so nicely what you think about it. The vote leaves no doubt that you really like it.
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| Reviewer:
pervtex
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Aug 9, 2003 |
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Reads like it was written by a poorly educated 6th grader. Sentence structure so bad that some don't make sense. I had to read some twice to decifer the idea the author was trying to get across. Dialogue very stilted and unreal for the occasion. (2/10)
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- Replied by:
mickni2000
(Edit) (Aug 10, 2003)
- Thanks for your review. It just clearly indicates that you haven't read the story carefully before writing a review like this. Try to read the third paragraph in my initial words for the story as I don’t think you have read it. If you like being a English school teacher it is OK with me but then you have to value the ‘student’ in accordance to the level of the English education. Maybe you will be helpful and do some of the work needed for correcting faults that I have asked for in the same paragraph?
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mistresscyn
(Edit) (Aug 10, 2003)
- I will echo the author too. He states in the introduction that he is not a native English speaker. He is danish and English is his second language. Can you perhaps write a story in Danish? I certainly couldn't. Please try to be nice to the authors as they do this for fun and to benefit the readers.
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| Reviewer:
mistresscyn
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Aug 8, 2003 |
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I loved this story! I loved all the nasty and inventive methods of humiliation and torture. Catheters and enemas were even included! Keep up this nasty story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
mickni2000
(Edit) (Aug 9, 2003)
- It's just 'food' for Janet and me! Reviews like these really make it worth continuing!! I'm too happy that you love all the different methods of humiliation and torture we have tried to uses in this story. During the play this really made it exciting for both Janet and I. Right now I'm happy we did decide to upload this story as well.
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akrawut
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Aug 8, 2003 |
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I've read and enjoy janet's ordeal story, and I enjoyed this one. I hope this is just the beginning. Very arousing and exciting story .
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
mickni2000
(Edit) (Aug 9, 2003)
- I'm happy you like both stories. Janet and I have not planned writing more on this story. Presently we have to use all the time we can get for writing new chapters on "Janet's Ordeal". I have written a few pages for part 4.
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