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Susan's Plight
Author: Dom Master
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(Added on Aug 16, 2003)
(This month 19629 readers) (Total 51925 readers) |
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A young woman is abducted from a parking lot and subjected to painful tortures and twisted sex acts by a lone rapist. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Aug 21, 2007 |
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Nicely written, mostly believable although I'm not sure every sex act is possible. I would say the story should have an extreme label and it definitely misses a watersport label. Good grammar and spelling. It just didn't turn me on because it's too clinical (like counting the strokes and he did so and so for 32.732 minutes). (6/10)
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- Replied by:
DomMaster
(Edit) (Aug 25, 2007)
- Thanks for the feedback.
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Oct 20, 2005 |
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What a disgusting piece of filth. It was sick, toe curling, gag a minute smut. And I ate up every word. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
DomMaster
(Edit) (Oct 21, 2005)
- Thank you nikita - so glad I could curl your toes. Now - if I only had the opportunity to bind them tight while I paddle your tits.... ;)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 5, 2004 |
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when you are good at stories, the stories are always good, i do not believe a long review for any atory is needed, the rating should say it all (10/10)
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- Replied by:
DomMaster
(Edit) (May 12, 2004)
- Thank you. I try to please
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Aug 16, 2003 |
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A talented writer and a decidedly nasty story. Relatively error free ('knead' was misspelled)and very intense and hot. Two things caused me to downgrade it a bit: "It seemed to Susan that he pumped almost as much cum into her stomach as he had piss earlier." That sentence stretches credibility beyond reasonableness. The second was the final sex act; I don't get out much, (or should I say 'in much'? Whatever!) but that was a new one for me. And, IMO, that scene merits an 'extreme' rating for the story. That episode aside, though, here's an author who knows how to put some oomph into a story (7/10)
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- Replied by:
DomMaster
(Edit) (Oct 1, 2003)
- I've made some editorial updates - thank you for your input. I do have to wonder why I would lose points for originality. I seem to encounter basically the same scenarios over and over, so I decided to deviate some what. That particular "act" was new for me as well, but I found it entertaining to write about. I guess there are lines, but it is fantasy after all.<br>Again, thank you for reading my story, and taking time to critique it.
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