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Command Performance
Author: Cortez
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(Added on Sep 20, 2003)
(This month 35585 readers) (Total 72723 readers) |
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Glenda and her partner Kid are on the run after a robbery. Their hideout is a large isolated house and Glenda has done her homework. Eighteen year old Helene is all alone practising the piano...and the music room is soundproof. Using the 'toys' in Glenda's bag, they force Helene to provide a very special and painful performance for their own private pleasure. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Mar 25, 2005 |
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Another great story, and well worth the reading. Here's hoping we see more tales of Helene, and perhaps her stepmother Melissa as well. (9/10)
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Emily
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Oct 3, 2003 |
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Cumbersome, but a rather exciting read. Especially interesting on the details and humiliation scenes. I do not understand the single quotation marks, perhaps it is just me? (8/10)
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Lord Douche
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Sep 23, 2003 |
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Excellent story, Cortez. Poor Helene :) (9/10)
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lex ludite
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Sep 22, 2003 |
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This is an excellently written story that generates enormous heat. It would be a shame to end it this way. (9/10)
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bdsmbill
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Sep 21, 2003 |
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I liked this one. (9/10)
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hd1955
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Sep 21, 2003 |
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Hey i liked it. easy to read and has good plot as do his other stories (9/10)
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SMartie57
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Sep 20, 2003 |
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I especially loved the detailed description of Helene's degradation and humiliation. The punishnments were too middle of the road for my taste. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Sep 20, 2003 |
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Great so far, hope there is lots mmore (9/10)
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