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Felicity Camp
Author: SmCyber
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(Added on Nov 2, 2003)
(This month 32085 readers) (Total 65283 readers) |
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Rape of female inmates in the notorious Felicitoy correction camp. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Slave 4072
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Jan 23, 2015 |
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Good start - a little too much explanatory detail (how everything words) in the beginning but the action was hot and interesting. (7/10)
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pipa
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Sep 12, 2011 |
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thought it was very creative and was impressed with the grammatical structure, though it turned me on more thinking the main character, mary, was in fact christy clark. it would be somewhat similar to a fantasy i had the other morning. (9/10)
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khalidsm
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Nov 7, 2003 |
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Well it has most of the categories to my liking. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Nov 5, 2003 |
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Yep, this story is red hot all right, but I have to agree with Rusty Bedpost, there are some noticable errors here. The one that really jumped out at me was the changing of tenses. The story begins in past, the popular choice for most authors, then switches, and swtiches again. (7/10)
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jbowler65
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Nov 5, 2003 |
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A good start. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Nov 5, 2003 |
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Many readers, including myself consider this to be a classic. There are many brutal twists and turns to follow as we are introduced to a fascist society that abuses women as a matter of state policy. (9/10)
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Rusty Bedpost
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Nov 4, 2003 |
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Overall a good basis for a story, needs greater charatcer development (how did the girl get there?)
You also need to check spelling and grammer some very noticable errors occured throughout the piece (5/10)
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- Replied by:
boccaccio2000g
(Edit) (Nov 8, 2003)
- It's none of my business, but if one is going to take someone to task for their spelling, one should check the spelling of 'over all', 'character', 'grammar', and 'noticeable' before using them in a two-sentence review.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 3, 2003 |
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OUTSTANDING, i hope ther is much more to come of the story
i loved the part of the training of the slaves, the riding the horses with dildoes, please keep it going (10/10)
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