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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Yoru
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Feb 12, 2005 |
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Very enjoyable, but the wife should have degraded her husband a little more physically, then it would have been perfect (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 19, 2004 |
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Very Well Done (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
rhmusic
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Jan 28, 2004 |
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Very, very enjoyable. You really get a feeling for how the wife enjoys her role, and that's a wonderful feeling. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Kingcodez
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Jan 15, 2004 |
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Great Story, I sorta feel bad for the guy, but admiration also. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Nov 10, 2003 |
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Quite good like most of your stuff (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Nov 6, 2003 |
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I enjoyed this quirky little story of yours, I really did. You poor little bugger, you! Please, tell me this story is based on your real life situation and I’ll have to up my score even higher.
Only – paragraphs please! It just makes it so much easy to read, especially of a computer screen. I have a feeling that perhaps the odd formatting may not have been your fault, but try to get it rectified anyway. A couple of times the dialog was confusing simply because it should been on a fresh line. On the really super nit picky side, remember too, ellipses should only be use where a word or words are omitted. (8/10)
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